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Kuzya member
Member # Joined: 22 Jun 2000 Posts: 223 Location: Los Angeles
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Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2001 11:09 am |
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hey there .. well another day and another painting .. i am very satisfied with the way this one came out so i live it as it is unless ofcourse i get some serious crituques ..
thanks for all the help ..
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Kuzya member
Member # Joined: 22 Jun 2000 Posts: 223 Location: Los Angeles
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Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2001 4:33 pm |
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no one at all.. mmm cool |
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Quasar member
Member # Joined: 01 Oct 2001 Posts: 355
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Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2001 4:43 pm |
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I waited for like 2 mins then all I got was a big red no image X...that might be your problem |
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[wakestarr] member
Member # Joined: 15 May 2001 Posts: 55 Location: .SE
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Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2001 6:08 pm |
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that's a really good painting!
my only crit would be the choice of colors for her skin.. makes her look dead or very dirty. besides that i like it.
[ December 13, 2001: Message edited by: [wakestarr] ] |
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dkimblad member
Member # Joined: 13 Dec 2001 Posts: 73 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2001 7:29 pm |
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I'm just missing the highlights. I can't pick up any direction for the light.
Very well done with the perspective and all. Looks like it was painted from a photograph. |
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root88 member
Member # Joined: 09 Jan 2001 Posts: 194 Location: Wilmington, DE USA
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Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2001 10:48 am |
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Are those her feet, or someone elses? It looks like her torso takes up the whole bed and her knees are at the headboard. |
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xor junior member
Member # Joined: 29 Nov 2001 Posts: 13 Location: Michigan
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Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2001 10:59 am |
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heh. looks real nice. everything looks fine. I knew those were feet right off... and so did the person lookin' over my sholder. heh.
smoother lighting would be nice ta see.
-xor |
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Kuzya member
Member # Joined: 22 Jun 2000 Posts: 223 Location: Los Angeles
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Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2001 1:16 pm |
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thanks .. will work on lightning later .. yes photo reference were used .. |
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audacity10 member
Member # Joined: 24 Nov 2001 Posts: 57 Location: Newcastle (UK)
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Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2001 12:29 am |
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Im...........scared. |
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Loathrae junior member
Member # Joined: 18 Nov 2001 Posts: 6
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Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2001 12:43 am |
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the fingers look odd |
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tdl junior member
Member # Joined: 06 Nov 2001 Posts: 27 Location: San Francisco
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Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2001 3:35 pm |
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Hello,
It's a nice painting, I guess you didn't get many replys because you didn't specify in the beginning that it's a photo reference. Remember that artists are very careful when it comes to rights and using other's pictures. If you took the picture then disregard the above
In any case, it's getting a bit muddy, _don't_ use black to shade, use color. Shadows always have color, no matter how dark they are. If you want a good example of using color for everything check out this painting by Soroya. In this painting the shadows are all kinds of colors, purple, green, brown, etc.
HTH, |
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Trigger junior member
Member # Joined: 01 Dec 2001 Posts: 11 Location: Stockholm, Sweden
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Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2001 12:25 am |
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I think Kuzya has been playing some Silent Hill 2 lately... don't ask me why, it just feels that way...
the skin tones are, as already mentioned, a bit off. Other than that i think it's great. |
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Kuzya member
Member # Joined: 22 Jun 2000 Posts: 223 Location: Los Angeles
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Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2001 2:20 am |
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hehe .. what is silent hill 2? now i wanna know ..
and well for shadows .. i dont use black.. i use real dark shade of blue but i am working on it .. ohh and yea photo was autorized to me by that gurl
thanks for comments |
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