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Kuzya
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 13, 2001 11:09 am     Reply with quote
hey there .. well another day and another painting .. i am very satisfied with the way this one came out so i live it as it is unless ofcourse i get some serious crituques ..

thanks for all the help ..

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Kuzya
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 13, 2001 4:33 pm     Reply with quote
no one at all.. mmm cool
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Quasar
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 13, 2001 4:43 pm     Reply with quote
I waited for like 2 mins then all I got was a big red no image X...that might be your problem
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[wakestarr]
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 13, 2001 6:08 pm     Reply with quote
that's a really good painting!

my only crit would be the choice of colors for her skin.. makes her look dead or very dirty. besides that i like it.

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dkimblad
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 13, 2001 7:29 pm     Reply with quote
I'm just missing the highlights. I can't pick up any direction for the light.
Very well done with the perspective and all. Looks like it was painted from a photograph.
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root88
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 14, 2001 10:48 am     Reply with quote
Are those her feet, or someone elses? It looks like her torso takes up the whole bed and her knees are at the headboard.
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xor
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 14, 2001 10:59 am     Reply with quote
heh. looks real nice. everything looks fine. I knew those were feet right off... and so did the person lookin' over my sholder. heh.

smoother lighting would be nice ta see.


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Kuzya
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 14, 2001 1:16 pm     Reply with quote
thanks .. will work on lightning later .. yes photo reference were used ..
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audacity10
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 16, 2001 12:29 am     Reply with quote
Im...........scared.
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Loathrae
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 16, 2001 12:43 am     Reply with quote
the fingers look odd
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tdl
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 16, 2001 3:35 pm     Reply with quote
Hello,

It's a nice painting, I guess you didn't get many replys because you didn't specify in the beginning that it's a photo reference. Remember that artists are very careful when it comes to rights and using other's pictures. If you took the picture then disregard the above

In any case, it's getting a bit muddy, _don't_ use black to shade, use color. Shadows always have color, no matter how dark they are. If you want a good example of using color for everything check out this painting by Soroya. In this painting the shadows are all kinds of colors, purple, green, brown, etc.


HTH,
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Trigger
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 17, 2001 12:25 am     Reply with quote
I think Kuzya has been playing some Silent Hill 2 lately... don't ask me why, it just feels that way...

the skin tones are, as already mentioned, a bit off. Other than that i think it's great.
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Kuzya
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 17, 2001 2:20 am     Reply with quote
hehe .. what is silent hill 2? now i wanna know ..

and well for shadows .. i dont use black.. i use real dark shade of blue but i am working on it .. ohh and yea photo was autorized to me by that gurl

thanks for comments
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