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Kuzya member
Member # Joined: 22 Jun 2000 Posts: 223 Location: Los Angeles
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Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2001 12:39 am |
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took 6 hours and 30 min... i am satesfied with it for now.. C&C more than welcome ...
thanks..
and here is piece of detail CLICK HERE |
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Awetopsy member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 3028 Location: Kelowna
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Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2001 10:41 am |
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I have no idea why nobody has replied to this, probly the same reason hardly replies to mine. :P
Here's my thoughts on the pic:
1) COOOL!!
2) It really looks like a photo taken at night. If it is, you should post the reference pic.
3) I really love the cloth. Very nicely rendered. Great use of color.
this is a very good peice of art, IMO. This is a picture that makes me want to see more pics.. |
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Manik Monkei member
Member # Joined: 23 Jun 2000 Posts: 132 Location: Sunnyvale, CA
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Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2001 11:29 am |
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I like this one too. I've seen it in both the WIP and here.. the one thing that keeps bothering me is her hairline. It might be totally accurate but it looks wrong to me everytime I see it. She looks like she's balding
The face looks really nice--good expression. Her upper lip looks much thinner on the right side but it seems to look okay on the face. And the shirt is almost there. It's really feeling like cloth in places (right side in particular)
I'd like to see a ref too if one was used. |
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Manik Monkei member
Member # Joined: 23 Jun 2000 Posts: 132 Location: Sunnyvale, CA
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Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2001 6:11 pm |
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wow. her hairline is that far back. she's really got it yanked back, huh. I take it back maybe it would help if you raised that pigtail on the left side (her right).. it looks like it starts at or a little above her eyebrow. are you going to put her bow in as well?
glad to see you're not just tracing over a ref. photo. it's looking cool |
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Kuzya member
Member # Joined: 22 Jun 2000 Posts: 223 Location: Los Angeles
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Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2001 12:18 am |
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here is the ref..
thanks for the comment .. and i am actually unhappy with the hairline too .. but well i need to use thiner brushes for that then i guess.. |
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