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Bilbo
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2001 1:07 pm     Reply with quote
looks great! only crit is that the composition could be better if the figure was a bit larger so it wouldn't have to "compete" that much with the dark elements in the background.
i'd also try to crop a lot of the left side of the image (maybe even up to the figure itself).
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Lihamyrsky
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2001 1:13 pm     Reply with quote
on the other hand, the man and the shadow of the mountain balance out the massive bulk of the space ship. i think... *scampers off back under the chair*

[ December 10, 2001: Message edited by: Lihamyrsky ]
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Manik Monkei
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2001 3:38 pm     Reply with quote
ok. I *really* like this one. I can't quite put my finger on it. You've pulled off the monochromatic look very well.. the green is beautiful and I feel like I'm right in the scene with the character. great use of lighting.

my only critique would be the shadow being cast by the left rock formation confused me. I thought it was a reflection at first until I realized the ground was solid.

*off to look through your website*
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Sukhoi
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2001 4:29 pm     Reply with quote
GREAT!!!
Perhaps the rocks' shadow should be longer. It looks like a reflection because its too short (distance travelled by the shadow on the ground), I think.

Sukhoi
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CrubbyPunk
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2001 4:37 pm     Reply with quote
Hey man,
I really like this.... The only thing I would of like to lf seen was a contrasting color somewhere. It could even be little.
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Icannon
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2001 5:48 pm     Reply with quote
great work. i love the green! it feels like something's incomplete.. like the image should extend or be shrunken - so maybe it's just the composition. either way, it's nice to look at.
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Quasar
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2001 11:39 pm     Reply with quote
You mean f-ing awsome spaceship dont you???
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sandhu
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 11, 2001 12:00 am     Reply with quote
wow! great piece!
dunno about composition, but i think everythings are in the right order.
neato.

and ugly my ass
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Finer
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 11, 2001 12:07 am     Reply with quote
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balistic
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 11, 2001 12:21 am     Reply with quote
Really nice. Love the lighting on the guy, as well as the reflection in his visor. Foreground rocks are neat too.
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Ian Jones
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 11, 2001 1:35 am     Reply with quote
Nice! that atmosphere is really good, and you handeled a difficult colour too. brilliant, I love it!
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Little Beefucker
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 11, 2001 1:54 am     Reply with quote
I also can't see a thing wrong with it. Color is sveek, depth looks great. High contrast is a sex button in my brain, and my eyes are popping like Quasar's at the ship design. Awesome art!
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Zorglub
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 11, 2001 9:23 am     Reply with quote
Sweeeet
I love how you made the atmosphere look alien. It really makes it feel like a strange distant planet.
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Sumaleth
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 11, 2001 9:42 am     Reply with quote
Major dig. Don't usually like monochromatic pictures but this one actually works great.

Row.
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xor
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 11, 2001 11:17 am     Reply with quote
hmm... red lights.

nice coloring. adds a nice mood to the picture. gives an 'alien' feel to the pic.

don't think this is monochrome. there are some red lights, a nice brown mountain range, a bit of yellow from the sun, etc.
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Shiro_tengu
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 12, 2001 12:19 am     Reply with quote
The image is wonderful to look at. It really looks fantastic. I love the ship design!
the entire image is really awesome
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