[timur04]

sorry to post this again but the place that i upload my pics to was down for 2 days.

Original Post :


Ok its done. Now what? Another one? Plez Crit this pic.
I like the style i chose to make this painting, giving more artistic control rather then a "craftsman" copying from references... thats too boring: feels like a real job.


[ December 01, 2001: Message edited by: timur04 ]

[ December 03, 2001: Message edited by: timur04 ]

[GPoodle]

IMO the back ground seemes too cluttered and the wheels look unfinished. The solid black is also semi-distracting.

[SWANY]

I like this pic, but i agree the wheels need a bit more detail, and the composition is a bit distracting, but Saving Private Rhyan is my favorite all time movie, so things like this intrest me, I'm also working on a WW2 pic.

[Dryfire]

Lookin good man, i think as he said above to add more detail to the wheels, also, make the background lighter behind the tank, so that the tank stands out more. ATM it seems to blend into the background, we don't want that =D lol


[edit] actually, you coudl make the back ground darker too, just lighten up the back part of the tank a bit more.. it seems that right behind the top section its total black... try to define that more.. i can't tell if its part of the back ground or the tank =D best of luck =D

[ December 03, 2001: Message edited by: Dryfire ]

[timur04]

thanx for your comments

[ December 05, 2001: Message edited by: timur04 ]

[[Shizo]]

Hey (rysski?) i was gonna answer before but closed window with this post and forgot
I wantedt to say that background should also have a lot of black on the left to blance out with whats on the right, and kinda push tank out of background rather making it a part of background

thats all, go listen to my crazy beats