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Aylex
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 29, 2001 7:40 am     Reply with quote
Hi people.
This is my first post here.

I know it sux, but i want know what are you think.
How can i make it better?

Feng sketch used as reference.
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Twacle
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 29, 2001 8:01 am     Reply with quote
Very Cool !!!

I like it. I am curious, did you paint over the drawing or fron scratch ?

Ideea: perhaps if you put the girl in the light a little more it would give the whole composition a better contrast, anyway it's just an ideea.
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Twacle
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 29, 2001 8:11 am     Reply with quote
Bad ideea i have sugested in my preavious post. Sorry, i hadn't read the title of your picure, my mistake.
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[Shizo]
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 29, 2001 5:08 pm     Reply with quote
lol shado baby
and i was just gonna send you the link to this post on icq..
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Anthony J
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 30, 2001 12:24 am     Reply with quote
well its cool that you attempted at doing such a difficult composition.

there will probably be somebody telling you this or that about whats wrong with the lighting in the figure & bla bla bla...

but i think overall that you got down a good sense of shadow and light.
there needs a bit of fixing here and there, but overall i was impressed with the way it looked like a ninja in the shadows.
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Shadow
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 30, 2001 12:36 am     Reply with quote
You rang? hehe good job
could use some more highlights (like on the sword and the hair and other places... to make it contrast more)
otherwise its good =)
('cept the feet... heh)
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