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Aylex junior member
Member # Joined: 29 Nov 2001 Posts: 11 Location: Ukraine
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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2001 7:40 am |
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Hi people.
This is my first post here.
I know it sux, but i want know what are you think.
How can i make it better?
Feng sketch used as reference.
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Twacle member
Member # Joined: 09 Nov 2001 Posts: 66 Location: -
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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2001 8:01 am |
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Very Cool !!!
I like it. I am curious, did you paint over the drawing or fron scratch ?
Ideea: perhaps if you put the girl in the light a little more it would give the whole composition a better contrast, anyway it's just an ideea. |
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Twacle member
Member # Joined: 09 Nov 2001 Posts: 66 Location: -
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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2001 8:11 am |
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Bad ideea i have sugested in my preavious post. Sorry, i hadn't read the title of your picure, my mistake. |
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[Shizo] member
Member # Joined: 22 Oct 1999 Posts: 3938
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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2001 5:08 pm |
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lol shado baby
and i was just gonna send you the link to this post on icq.. |
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Anthony J member
Member # Joined: 22 Oct 1999 Posts: 412 Location: Oakville
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Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2001 12:24 am |
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well its cool that you attempted at doing such a difficult composition.
there will probably be somebody telling you this or that about whats wrong with the lighting in the figure & bla bla bla...
but i think overall that you got down a good sense of shadow and light.
there needs a bit of fixing here and there, but overall i was impressed with the way it looked like a ninja in the shadows. |
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Shadow member
Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 274 Location: Canada, ON
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Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2001 12:36 am |
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You rang? hehe good job
could use some more highlights (like on the sword and the hair and other places... to make it contrast more)
otherwise its good =)
('cept the feet... heh) |
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