[KeLLuSioN]

yep i sorta drifted off a long time ago after posting something like once. so i don't really expect anyone to remember me but i'm back not i guess and i hope i don't suck as much

here's some of my recent stuff:

[ancient skeleton pirate]

The faces and bodies are weird proportions, the third one: the body looks unnatural, coloring is unimaginative. for some reson i like the middle one, her lips are good or something. practice copying faces and bodies from real life to help u get right the proportions.

also please dont write cryptic text thats supposed to inspire emotion. the picture itself is supposed to cause emotion. moody text like "when i look into the moon, all i see is myself," or "true love has no name" has no substance. poop!

[KeLLuSioN]

...ouch...

[Lukiaz]

ancient skeleton pirate - I love this ..."her lips are good or something".

Wow you must've pushed hard for that compliment.

This artist is by all means entitled to place little writings or poetry to accompany the pic that he/she see's fit.
Considering there is no 'art authority', your seemingly *factual* statement is blatantly unwarranted.
I'm humbled by KeLLuSioN's response as many(most probably myself included) would have been a tad on the angry side.

KeLLuSioN- As it was so kindly written, the anatomy of the first and third could certainly be improved(as could 99% of all figure art out there). Of course before this is even said, you yourself realise its not perfect(such a thing?).
The bright colours in the first are just that.....bright! Depends what your after but its very *candy* if you catch my drift.
Really dig the second one, the blue hair works nicely and your lines are sweet.
Perspective issues with the third....if the veiwer were to be seeing it from this vantage then the character would be in the process of sliding/falling off.
Nice pic....I get the feeling its dusk?.

[ November 27, 2001: Message edited by: Lukiaz ]