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BooMSticK
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 Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2001 8:03 am |
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heya!
I've been awfully quite lately on the forums - too much work!  I just wanted to give a little shout and say hi. This is nothing special and basically just a doodle and one of the very few pieces that I've managed to complete outside work... Comments and critique welcome! 
,Boom
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Gordillo
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| Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2001 8:08 am |
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Where is his nipples???  very nice pic,no crits. |
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DiXter
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| Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2001 5:27 pm |
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looks neat!
The head looks a bit small on that body.. |
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taff
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| Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2001 5:18 am |
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the hand looks a bit strange, it seems to short. Esspecially the "small finger", if you know what I mean.
I really like her pose, and the anatomy! |
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ftgjcf
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| Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2001 6:15 am |
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nice job. seems a little unfinished to me tho.
First of all I like the colors of this, but the pose and her body are nice too. some anatomy issues: Too small head, a little short neck and too long arms
Looks like we work pretty much the same way when painting skin..`But you are much better than I am to implement cold colors. Is that painter you use ? That 'star' to the left is where you pick colors ?
post more if you get the time |
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Rhomb
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| Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2001 10:44 am |
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Hey, very nice lighting and skintones on this one. Cool composition too. You could've continued on her visible foot a bit more. Not necessarily to render all the toes, just to define the shape better. It would give the image more finished look with a little effort, IMO.
Ville
[ November 24, 2001: Message edited by: Rhomb ] |
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Matthias
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| Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2001 11:07 am |
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| the left hand seems to be missing. I guess iit could happen it is hidden behind the right hand and thigh, but it just looks odd to me. |
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BooMSticK
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| Posted: Sun Nov 25, 2001 2:48 am |
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Hi all, thx for commenting!
Gorillo - his? lol...
DiXter - thx. and yeah.. your'e right! Will fix!
T4fF - Thx! Yeah, maybe I should go over that hand one last time...
Geelimp - Thx! Yes, this is Painter... The star to the left is not for picking colors. Just a composition thingie, I guess
Rhomb - Thx! It was left 'unfinished' with intention, but I can see what you mean.
Matthias - Good observation. I will fix this!
,Boom |
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