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DKScully junior member
Member # Joined: 13 Nov 2001 Posts: 22 Location: Spain
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Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2001 1:01 pm |
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I forgot to post the picture�����
I'm new... Obviously.
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Jabberwocky member
Member # Joined: 08 May 2000 Posts: 681 Location: Kansas
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Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2001 1:05 pm |
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Pretty dang cool. I like dark scences with blueish cast to them. |
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pro-phet member
Member # Joined: 13 Nov 2001 Posts: 130 Location: Kandel,Germany
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Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2001 4:09 pm |
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AWESOME. like it. one question: how old are you? |
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jHof member
Member # Joined: 23 Jun 2000 Posts: 252 Location: Chicago, IL
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Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2001 6:02 pm |
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Very cool image. Though you could have cut the picture down the center, kept the right side and saved the modem users some bandwidth time. Not sure if that gives any hints for the rest of the picture I wouldn't know what to put over there. |
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DKScully junior member
Member # Joined: 13 Nov 2001 Posts: 22 Location: Spain
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Posted: Sat Nov 17, 2001 12:57 am |
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It's a test I made at work... I'd like to hear from you. I want to learn. :-P
Thanks. |
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DKScully junior member
Member # Joined: 13 Nov 2001 Posts: 22 Location: Spain
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Posted: Sat Nov 17, 2001 6:42 am |
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I'm 23. Thanks for the hints. I'd like you to be more critic because I'd like to learn. :-P.
Thanks. |
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pro-phet member
Member # Joined: 13 Nov 2001 Posts: 130 Location: Kandel,Germany
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Posted: Sat Nov 17, 2001 7:18 am |
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if i could do thing like that i would critic also. but i am new and only 17 years old. so i think it is awesome bu i can search for something to criticize. just one moment.......... sorry, didn't find anything. next time make your picture worse and i will find some critics ![](images/smiles/icon_wink.gif) |
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-- Transcendent -- member
Member # Joined: 12 Nov 2000 Posts: 251 Location: Somewhere, Sometime, Somehow
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Posted: Sat Nov 17, 2001 9:03 am |
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Very mysterious !
The monochromatic blue fill doesn't look more like moonlight than it does a Hollywood floodlight, but it works nicely nonetheless.
In terms of criticisms, I think there's a lack of depth in this picture ... and the arched stone path seems way too steep for anyone to scale ... you may want to work on that. |
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Shijima member
Member # Joined: 23 Nov 2000 Posts: 53 Location: oregon-usa
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Posted: Sat Nov 17, 2001 10:05 am |
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What is that in the top left hand corner?
a part of a tree??
besides that it is a realy good pic |
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DKScully junior member
Member # Joined: 13 Nov 2001 Posts: 22 Location: Spain
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Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2001 8:40 am |
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Thanks for the hints, It's a part of a tree, :-).
I'll post more pictures for you to critiquize, Thanks a lot.
:-))))) |
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corvax junior member
Member # Joined: 10 Oct 2001 Posts: 27 Location: Vancouver, Canada
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Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2001 1:36 pm |
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This looks gorgeous. If I had any crits, I would give the path a curve, instead of having it go straight up the picture plane. I think that would help balance the image, and draw the eye to your focal point (the light source) more. Very nice work! |
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Grihan junior member
Member # Joined: 12 May 2000 Posts: 27 Location: Alcobendas, Madrid, Spain
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Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2001 2:58 pm |
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Hello, DK! you in this forum!
Nice work, but...some problems with the perspective, I wouldn't like to "climb" that path! |
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Nathan Marciniak junior member
Member # Joined: 19 Oct 2001 Posts: 48 Location: Port Washington, WI
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Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2001 3:14 pm |
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Cool lighting, but the elements almost look like cardboard cutouts, kinda like a stage "set" if you will. The trees also look funny. Like they were beveled or something. And why the black stroke on all the leaves? What did you use to make this? They look like sprites.
I don't blame you for "cheating" - trees are very laborious to draw properly. Anyway, it's a cool scene, it just could use some tweaks. The path perspective does look kinda stilted as well. Maybe make it more winding.
A silhouetted figure standing in the light at the top of the stone path would be creepy.
maybe some black creatures lurking in the grass too.
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DKScully junior member
Member # Joined: 13 Nov 2001 Posts: 22 Location: Spain
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Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2001 3:44 pm |
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EY GRIHAAAN... JEJEJEJ...
Mmmm...- yes... Lack of depth..
to do this I made some brushes (leaves, grass.. with pain shop pro...) then y puti it in layers and try to iluminated in photoshop. Sorry If you don't understand anything but I'm not English speaker... :-) Ask all that you want ... I't try to improve.
Thanks A LOT���� |
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Jucas member
Member # Joined: 14 Jan 2001 Posts: 387 Location: Pasadena, CA
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Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2001 5:13 pm |
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Wow! Reminds me of Lord of The Rings when frodo is first on his journey. |
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catnip member
Member # Joined: 26 Mar 2001 Posts: 100 Location: boston, mass. usa
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Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2001 4:55 am |
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I like the lighting...it's mysterious...and
the blue color you've given it is beautiful! |
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Gordillo member
Member # Joined: 18 May 2000 Posts: 308 Location: Guildford,UK
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Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2001 1:56 am |
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ke passa Almu!!!! Hey nice to see you at this forum, beautiful pic.
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DKScully junior member
Member # Joined: 13 Nov 2001 Posts: 22 Location: Spain
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Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2001 3:01 am |
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:-PPP
Q pasaaaa :-))
A ver si te conectas al irc. :-PPPP
Thanks a lot.
KISSES. |
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