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DKScully
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2001 1:01 pm     Reply with quote
I forgot to post the picture�����

I'm new... Obviously.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2001 1:05 pm     Reply with quote
Pretty dang cool. I like dark scences with blueish cast to them.
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2001 4:09 pm     Reply with quote
AWESOME. like it. one question: how old are you?
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2001 6:02 pm     Reply with quote
Very cool image. Though you could have cut the picture down the center, kept the right side and saved the modem users some bandwidth time. Not sure if that gives any hints for the rest of the picture I wouldn't know what to put over there.
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DKScully
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 17, 2001 12:57 am     Reply with quote
It's a test I made at work... I'd like to hear from you. I want to learn. :-P

Thanks.
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DKScully
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 17, 2001 6:42 am     Reply with quote
I'm 23. Thanks for the hints. I'd like you to be more critic because I'd like to learn. :-P.

Thanks.
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 17, 2001 7:18 am     Reply with quote
if i could do thing like that i would critic also. but i am new and only 17 years old. so i think it is awesome bu i can search for something to criticize. just one moment.......... sorry, didn't find anything. next time make your picture worse and i will find some critics
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 17, 2001 9:03 am     Reply with quote
Very mysterious !

The monochromatic blue fill doesn't look more like moonlight than it does a Hollywood floodlight, but it works nicely nonetheless.

In terms of criticisms, I think there's a lack of depth in this picture ... and the arched stone path seems way too steep for anyone to scale ... you may want to work on that.
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Shijima
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 17, 2001 10:05 am     Reply with quote
What is that in the top left hand corner?

a part of a tree??

besides that it is a realy good pic
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DKScully
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 18, 2001 8:40 am     Reply with quote
Thanks for the hints, It's a part of a tree, :-).

I'll post more pictures for you to critiquize, Thanks a lot.

:-)))))
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 18, 2001 1:36 pm     Reply with quote
This looks gorgeous. If I had any crits, I would give the path a curve, instead of having it go straight up the picture plane. I think that would help balance the image, and draw the eye to your focal point (the light source) more. Very nice work!
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 18, 2001 2:58 pm     Reply with quote
Hello, DK! you in this forum!
Nice work, but...some problems with the perspective, I wouldn't like to "climb" that path!
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Nathan Marciniak
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 18, 2001 3:14 pm     Reply with quote
Cool lighting, but the elements almost look like cardboard cutouts, kinda like a stage "set" if you will. The trees also look funny. Like they were beveled or something. And why the black stroke on all the leaves? What did you use to make this? They look like sprites.

I don't blame you for "cheating" - trees are very laborious to draw properly. Anyway, it's a cool scene, it just could use some tweaks. The path perspective does look kinda stilted as well. Maybe make it more winding.

A silhouetted figure standing in the light at the top of the stone path would be creepy.
maybe some black creatures lurking in the grass too.

[ November 18, 2001: Message edited by: Nathan Marciniak ]
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DKScully
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 18, 2001 3:44 pm     Reply with quote
EY GRIHAAAN... JEJEJEJ...

Mmmm...- yes... Lack of depth..

to do this I made some brushes (leaves, grass.. with pain shop pro...) then y puti it in layers and try to iluminated in photoshop. Sorry If you don't understand anything but I'm not English speaker... :-) Ask all that you want ... I't try to improve.

Thanks A LOT����
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 18, 2001 5:13 pm     Reply with quote
Wow! Reminds me of Lord of The Rings when frodo is first on his journey.
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 19, 2001 4:55 am     Reply with quote
I like the lighting...it's mysterious...and
the blue color you've given it is beautiful!
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2001 1:56 am     Reply with quote
ke passa Almu!!!! Hey nice to see you at this forum, beautiful pic.

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DKScully
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2001 3:01 am     Reply with quote
:-PPP

Q pasaaaa :-))

A ver si te conectas al irc. :-PPPP

Thanks a lot.

KISSES.
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