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5cents
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 Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2001 7:18 pm |
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please crit,if anyone wants to colour this they are more than welcome
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Ahcri
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| Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2001 9:26 pm |
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The stance of the swordsman is really nice. The lower part of the bald guy's right arm seems to be shorter and less muscular than his left arm. And his waist seems to be too thin, making his left arm looks detached from the rest of the body. Otherwise, it would be a good picture to colour.. if only I could do colour.  |
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catnip
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| Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2001 4:23 am |
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You askrd for a crit... You have talent..
but you need to work on "the basics of
drawing human anatomy more..plus composition.
I don't belive you've had any training.
Consider going to art school.
don't give up ....you will improve!
i bet your a teenager..you've got years of learning ahead of you. Don't give up!
You will improve! |
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pro-phet
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| Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2001 5:19 am |
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| yea the anatomi. the right arm for example seems to be uncorrect. i mean i can't do my arm like this. but nice. keep on. i can't do better... i think. |
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5cents
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| Posted: Tue Nov 20, 2001 12:13 am |
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| Wow now that is an art crit,you'r right im 17 and my only training is that I was in art class in grade 10.Cool are you sikick |
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