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Digital Jackass
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 12, 2001 9:53 pm     Reply with quote
Heres 2 pictures an artist that goes by Deacon Black asked and paid me to color



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Ali Sama
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 12, 2001 10:12 pm     Reply with quote
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Originally posted by Digital Jackass:
Heres 2 pictures an artist that goes by Deacon Black asked and paid me to color

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i like. ^_- your improving.
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Shiro_tengu
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 13, 2001 2:30 am     Reply with quote
cute and really good colouring
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mk
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 13, 2001 3:24 am     Reply with quote
The first one looks better.

Try to get rid of these specular higlights all over the place. In the second one the earrings have the same "shinyness" like the skin. The Hair looks just like a normal grandient.
In both images i cant really see what kind material the clothes, skin, Hair ect are made of...
And why dont give a bit more details to the create and the stone?
Hope you dont hate me know... but u asked and i answerd.

mk
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Highfive
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 13, 2001 3:38 am     Reply with quote
I prefer the way you've done the hilights on the demon girl to the ones on the black girl. Skin never gets shiny enough to show speculars that small I think.

Not sure about the lighting on left arm and the right boot. The shapes of the hilights don't quite seem to fit the shape they're on.

The skin on the demon girl looks great, however, and the shiny streaks in the hair are nice looking, too.
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jcterminal
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 13, 2001 4:50 pm     Reply with quote
you were allowed to touch the art of deacon black? with his permission?!?

my god. you lucky animal. i'd give my friend's right arm to get permission to colour some of his work.
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edible snowman
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 13, 2001 4:57 pm     Reply with quote
would there be more light from the lighter hitting her? i guess it depends on the other lightsource.

[ November 13, 2001: Message edited by: edible snowman ]
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Digital Jackass
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 13, 2001 5:38 pm     Reply with quote
no hate felt mk, thanks for the crits. I tried to make it look shiny and nice, people seem to be attracted to things like that and they're pinups and deacon loved it plus he loved a lot of other peoples stuff he asked for them to color. Also i was gonna put some orange on her fro and stuff but, i thought it woulda looked kinda f'd, plus the fact i don't know how to color afros.
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