[pipedreamer]

I am considering giving her a wild strawberry vine tattoo, or long black gloves... She looks too unadorned.

Thoughts please.

[lel]

Lookin' good!
I'm thinking of a shower in a public bathroom due to the bright light... so a tattoo may suit better than gloves? (Hey, W.I.P. in that case)

[maceface]

looks good so far although it looks like she has lots of spotlights on her. all in all i think it looks pretty good...and go with the tatt.

[pipedreamer]

Thanks guys. I intentionally painted her 'bright'. I wanted a very pale look with extremely subtle shadows on her skin(the cream to go with her strawberry hair).

A tattoo is in order. Any other crits or suggestions?

[Kin Aquila]

her arm is very short.
she does not appear to have a shoulder-blade (is this the right word for it?)
her ... erm ... hip seems to be out of perspective. like the camera was moved a bit to the right when the lower parts were done.

but still ... love it. the skin.

[pipedreamer]

Thanks for the comments...

You are right, her elbow should appear lower.

About the hip, I'm not completely sure what is wrong there. The model for this was rather thin...

......

Here is an update, with the arm elongated, and tattoo...

[pipedreamer]

Well, I just spotted the pinup thread (with regret). I should have posted this there.....

Grr!