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tilman porschuetz
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I say a warm hello to everybody on this amazing board.
This will be my first post, and I start with a mouse drawing I did in school. Sorry, but I just ordered a tablet.( yeah)
Bear Knight:
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Wild
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| Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2001 6:27 am |
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| i have no idea WHY. but i like it. |
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[666]Flat
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| Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2001 8:53 am |
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quote:
Originally posted by Wild:
i have no idea WHY. but i like it.
Maybe because it reminds you of of good ole days when your six years old sister showed her cute kiddie drawings to you, you know. Something like that. |
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Kaete
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| Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2001 9:00 am |
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Does anyone remember an old cartoon called Gummi Bears? That's what this pic makes me think of.  |
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tilman porschuetz
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| Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2001 2:56 pm |
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This guy is acctually designed as the main character for a childrens book, so that's why it looks like a cute instead of a mean knight.
Thx for your comments, but there were not tips, how to improve it, at all.
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roundeye
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| Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2001 3:18 pm |
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| tip: the cross-hatching aint workin' with this. take it out, clean it up. |
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Bishop_Six
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| Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2001 3:20 pm |
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All the scribbly black lines(around his feet, for instance) make it much too messy. It'll look a lot better if you keep the lines clean. So, clean it up and add some details to it.  |
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tilman porschuetz
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| Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2001 3:26 pm |
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Yes, Thanks.
This was the first Computer Drawing anyways. I have never really done linework before, so I was still in texturing.
I will change it, thanks.
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Daydreamer
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| Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2001 4:01 pm |
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Tilman, thats not supposed to be some character for a childrens book....its your lame hero for our gummibear battle....
and here's mine:
.:LR:.
[ November 09, 2001: Message edited by: Daydreamer ] |
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tilman porschuetz
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| Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2001 4:47 pm |
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Yes it does. The Battle was only an Inspiration to choose a Gummi baer.
Anyways, I need to improve a lot. Wacom, I am waiting.
[ November 08, 2001: Message edited by: tilman porschuetz ] |
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