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jayceeL
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 Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2001 6:19 am |
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Thanks for your previous comments, they are very helpfull.
I tried to fix some of the problems you pointed out.
To The_Anarchist:
thanks for pointing out that the gun wasnt cycling, I think it looks nicer now.
To others:
Tried as well to fix some of the problems you pointed out especially the face. But I didnt really succeed that much I think.
Is it at all better now? What do you think?
JayCeeL
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Robert Ashley
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| Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2001 10:41 am |
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Should the barral of the gun be that dark? it looks to me that the fire in the front is not part of the picture cause the barral is jet black and the fire is a few inches away from the gun...but I never paused a chow yeun fat movie (however you spell his name) so I dont know exactly how the fire is supposed to look like anyway...maybe it is a few inches away from the barral.
Just looks strange to me. Take it with a grain of salt
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Shijima
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| Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2001 5:03 pm |
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| the stuff comin out the barrel looks more like smoke then a blast |
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Tinusch
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| Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2001 5:06 pm |
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| Amazing, I love it |
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