[Metz]

I've been working on this one at school. I sketched it first and did the rest in ps with a mouse.. hope you like it



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Any hints/tips for what i can do better in future images would be great. Crits are ofcourse welcomed aswell

[Awetopsy]

I didnt know medeival guys wore jeans j/k

There is one thing I definately like about this piture.. It really looks like there is wind.. I like the fact that snow is blowing off the rock and everything looks like its being blown in one direction.. good job on that..

the hair looks a little stiff tho..

I thin you need to work out your anatomy a bit more and work on lights and darks.. but over-all this is a good try. good job

[Marvel]

Looks pretty nice, but there are a couple of thing's I'd 'complain' about - first thing is the obsessive saturation you're using - mostly in the cloak and the amulet, but also in the hair, pants and shoulder-pads. Another issue is the pattern overlaying the whole pic - it looks like you're trying to hide something and/or get more detail - which imo is the wrong way to go. Third issue is the lighting - doesn't seem like the light source is all that consistent - too bright in places and too even light in the whole pic.

But don't take me wrong, the pic is pretty nice and has potential to be even better. Just keep on working on it and you'll have a masterpiece.

[Metz]

thanks for replying

Awetopsy: thanks, maybe his last name is strauss (hehe, kidding). i just always fuck up anatomy when i'm going to color them

Marvel: Got any tips on how I can work instead on the lights/shadows. i also need tips on that overlaying thingy, i really got stuck there and ended up with that. corrections on how the lightning should've been would also be great. thanks alot for the crit!

[ November 03, 2001: Message edited by: Metz ]