[Darkmoon]

lets give this a shot... see if i remeber how to post images.... may be a little big... but comment and critique at will, its ok to be mean....



i was going for like an old sitting portrait... shes an rpg charaacter of mine... shes walking dead so, hence the skin tone.

tear me to shreds

[Awetopsy]

RIP! TEAR! SHRED! SNAP! GRRRR!!! RRRIIIPPP!!!...


no can see the image.

[roundeye]

this rocks! i love the colours. her left eye looks a little big though

[Mr. T]

i like the hair a lot. good pic in general.

[The_Anarchist]

Bravo, an excellent piece of work.
Perhaps you could do a little somthing to the eyes to enhance the "Walking Dead" feel

[Lomi]

just out of curiosity... why does she have no arms?, other than that it's pretty damned spiffy

[hurricane]

beautifull DM

hi btw


.caneman

[Anthony]

Hey there, welcome back ;] Eyes are a little off in general, and she would benefit from some more dramatic lighting - especially if this were used as a small portrait in a PC RPG game, more complete modelling of form would make her more recognizable in the game. Nice work though, the details are lovely! Keep it up ^_^

[laslauk]

Very nice. Perhaps eyes are not that big in reality, but I don't think it's necessary to make them any smaller, they fit the picture just fine. Instead I'd make the eyelashes a bit longer and appealing, it looks as if they were burnt. The background is great, I like the oval shape, a wild idea would be to change the colour of her eyes to fit the background colour. And maybe I'd remove her right ear (from the picture), I'm not sure if that's visible from this angle. The dress looks good. Perhaps I'd make her nostrils a tiny bit darker. Anyway, these are just my opinions, you're the artist, on the whole great portrait!

[Darkmoon]

woo hoo replies! wow, im so proud...

awetopsy: sorry you cant see it? it might have been the server at the time....

roundeye: yeah her eyes are big in general dont you think? im going to try and make it smaller see how it looks

Mr.T: Thank you, im glad you like it

Anarchist: By walking dead, i kinda meant Vampire... i tried to make them a lighter color than a usual eye, like the pigment drained out a little. perhaps i have to go even lighter.

Lomi: turn up the brightness? she has arms, the one in front has a broach on it, the on in back is hidden by her torso. its pretty dark.

Bradford: yes its a very slight angle, your right. im still kinda bad with perspectives of the face. Im glad you liked it thanks!

Huri! hiiiiii long time no see *hugs*

Anthony: its not actually used in a game.... its just if someone asked what my character looked like, id send them this. The eyes look off i think because i drew them big, but they are where they are supposed to be... just... big

Laslauk: wow, all thing i thought about while drawing this, my first draft has yellow eyes, but i wanted blue to bring out the black and contrast with the background. I thought about making the nostrils darker too, i just liked her subtle nose, but it might make her look better, ill try it when i try and make her eye smaller. And yes i agree eyes probably arent that big in real life, my drawing are mostly cartoony or anime, so thats my excuse!

Thanks everyone for taking the time out to crit me! i appreciate every word!

-Lisa

[AfterShoxX]

Whoa, great piece. I love vampires.

The only thing I see that hasn't yet been posted previously is the placement of her head. It seems like shes a little slumped forward maybe.

This is definately one of my favorites.

[Highfive]

What RPG has she been created for? I bet she belongs in Arcanum, judging by the 18th century attire.

I agree that the left eye is just a little bit bigger than the right, but otherwise it all looks terrific. I really dig the hairstyle and the outfit.

[J Bradford]

Nice image, I think the one eye is slightly bigger because it's a slight 3/4 view. The contrast with the face and the red background works very nicely.