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SeanW · Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2001 6:51 am

Hi everyone, first time post, I could use some critique.
Thanks

Shijima · Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2001 1:25 pm

LOOKS GOOD BUT ONLY PROBLEM I CAN SEE IS HIS THUMB LOOKS REALY LONG....

NICE JOB

SeanW · Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2001 2:00 pm

Ah, yeah now that I look at the thumb it was really too long, I fixed the thumb and accidently updated the image with the same file name so you guys wont get to see the bad thumb, sorry but the image is updated now. Thanks for the crit.

NextGen · member Member # Joined: 24 Apr 2001 Posts: 149

shijima: is your keyboard broken? or do you just like yelling?

Crepusculum · Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2001 6:42 pm

The 'Avenger strikes again! hehe. You're hella gay.

galen · Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2001 8:25 pm

He sure is happy...

Jacks True Self · junior member Member # Joined: 04 Aug 2001 Posts: 26

At a first quick glance the right palm is alomost unnoticable, so it looks like the wrist is going right into his chest or is cut off.
Nicely rendered in some parts but overall anatomy is somewhat off. The right side has sharper shadows which are a lot better than the blurred ones you used on the left.

Is he blowing us a kiss or something? Is this some gay thing?

SeanW · Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2001 10:57 pm

Yes I'll be the first one to admit the anatomy is off, I was trying to get it to look like it was lit from the right, I'll try and play with the sharpness of the shadows and see if that works any better, the hand deal is supposed to be that someone picked the empty hand in a game and the rock dude is happy that the person picked the wrong one hence an empty hand. But if you want it to be something gay be my guest.