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bms
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 Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2001 4:19 pm |
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Well, this is my second digital pic ever...
It was based on the Tomb Raider movie poster
I guess it turned out to be ok.
Some C&C, anyone?
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timur
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| Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2001 4:38 pm |
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| Her face is not cute. |
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bms
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| Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2001 4:41 pm |
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Yep! Evil Lara Croft!!! hahaha!
Anyway, I was expecting more construtive
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Poprocksz
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| Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2001 8:15 pm |
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my only real crit is for you to go
back to practicing anatomy. |
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dr . bang
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| Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2001 8:25 pm |
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| go for the pencil work first, digital is not always a good thing. |
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Tiger Eaten
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| Posted: Sat Oct 27, 2001 7:39 am |
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hehehe, Anyone see AJ in hackers? Nice. Now she's more tatooed and married to what's his sheep and the shine has kind of worn off her IMOP, but she was great back then. Wonderful emotion.
bms: If I were to crit you it would be two fold, one personal and one practical. The personal crit is that I don't care for the blue green background that you have chosen, I would much rather see your work presented with a plain white background, it would stand out better. That gradient really does not add anything as far as I can see.
The practical crit is that I think your drawing shows promise, many of the angles of her pose you have nailed quite well, as everyone can see by the comparison pic I have posted. However, I STRESS that you should try and slow down in your drawing and observe more, many of the details of this drawing you have drawn out of proportion to your original reference material. I know that you have taken your own approach to this subject and not tried to copy it exactly, but certain details like the width of her pony tail look more to me like hasty oberservation as opposed to creative licence.
I would make my next few sketches simple BLACK and WHITE drawings and forget about shadow and color. Try to get specific shapes and scales down a little more exactly and I think you will be happier with the end result.
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