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Ascan · Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2001 5:37 pm

what do you think?

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xXxPZxXx · Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2001 6:15 pm

oooh purty. very smooth with "just enough" detail. Nice style

-PZ-

Ascan · Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2001 6:26 pm

thaks. this is my first serious works on tablet. i spend about 5-6 hours on each.

blunt3d · Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2001 7:39 pm

nice pics. the second looks here and there too blurry, imho.

Shiro_tengu · Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2001 7:50 pm

I like these.

I think the second picture could do with some middle ground. You have the trees in the foreground and a flat wall of blured trees in the background. I thought perhaps a little transition would help. I think you are attempting this with the middle tree but Maybe it could be taken further. It could be just the removal of the horizontal line at the base of the distant tree line.
Please dont get me wrong, I like these a lot.

Superbug · Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2001 8:02 pm

Uh hey. Coupla problems i might add about your drawing style or at least, what i THINK your trying to achieve. Let your brush strokes flow a bit smoother, and for a minute forget about detail. I see you put a lot of work into those leaves, however, sometimes details just appear through form, or at least, grasping the form, shapes, lights and shadows of a picture. You don't have to zoom in with photshop and pay special attention to leaves, doing so might disrupt the overal flow of your picture. Just a thought. Good start though.

Sonique128 · Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2001 8:22 pm

good pictures. but i see a problem with the second picture. the trees and grass is TOO green, its like pure green. get some neutrals in there to make it less of a pure green

Ascan · Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2001 10:35 pm

thanks! i try to correct errors you founded in my pictures.

Robert Ashley · Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2001 9:54 am

I dont think your grass is too green.....

I actually love the fact that you have such a strong theme color to each of these pictures of nature.

You should make more and put them all together as a mural or something.

They are not exactly photo realistic, if thats what you were going for....if you were, then the grass is too green.

But if you were just doing an stylistic work...I think you should make more and have a theme or something.

Looks nice, although like said in posts before, the second is a little too blurry in places. (I know its hard to do that depth of field thing without ruining the picture, I cant do it myself really...I have been trying too

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Anyway, GOOD WORK!!!