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Obi-one
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 Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2001 7:03 am |
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Hi guys, I post every five thousand years ...
Just a manga like pic (for my girlfriend birthday I admit 
hope you like it and, please feel free to crit 
have fun
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Shinigumi
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| Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2001 8:41 am |
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I love manga style artwork! This is nicely done. I especially like her hair and the cherry tree. The posters on the wall are a very cute concept, too.  I'm sure your gf will love it. |
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jayceeL
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| Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2001 9:59 am |
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Very nice, especially the face. How long did it take you?
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Gordillo
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| Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2001 10:07 am |
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| Very nice style.Likes a lot. |
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Kool
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| Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2001 12:28 pm |
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I'm one of 123141212 manga lovers...and I've been processing my drawing skills through manga style first and after adopted my own style....anyhow....this pic is well done...keep posting your stuff
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Vgta
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| Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2001 12:54 pm |
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| Very nice, I like the Sakura tree also. love the expression on the girls face, maybe the hands could have been done thinner but that's just my personal preference. Nice work, you should post more often. |
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shahar2k
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| Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2001 9:45 pm |
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you know, that's really kinda cool, heh french drawings, much like japanese have a very unique style, heh Its interesting that while you draw in a japanese style you can still see some of the french style bleeding in there (the rounder lips, big eyes which are much wider apart than in anime) heh just my observation,
oh and I REALLY like the trees in the background, they are very convincing, and beutifull, the girl is good too, but could use some more contrast as she looks kind of flat. as a whole the picture is kinda cool, but I think you should remove the pole, it disrupts the image's "flow", and maybe add some sort of low horizon line behind the wall, or variation in the sky, to show the angle of view. |
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Obi-one
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| Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2001 11:39 pm |
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hey thanks a lot guys, so many good vibes in the morning is really cool
I spend something like 2 days for it, im not a wacon tablet addict, I take my time to draw carefully ...
Because of lack of time the composition is limited,even simplicist and I would love to make it darker and "not so happy"
For example, put some space on the left to include a junkyark behind the wall or something ... saying that everything is not so nice and clean...
Anyway, thanks again |
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