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Vgta · Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 12:02 pm

I've been looking at some of your posts and I think this one stand out the most, interesting subject matter. I would suggest to start playing with more typography as well as adding more images and using the different blending modes in photoshop to create a stronger piece overall.
Not bad at all right now, as always there is room for improvement.

horstenpeter · Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 12:18 pm

Hey, where did you get that gun ? I thought those were outlawed in Germany.....or is your father a hunter ?

I have to agree, this is the best I've seen of you so far. I would make the text a bit more readable, and I would make the gun stand out more. Took me a while to find it.
Another thing that would be interesting if there would be more of a play between light and dark in the piece.....I'm thinking of light coming through leaves or something like that.
Also I think the horizontal lines don't work well in this piece. They should follow the form of the body, IMHO.

sacrelicious · Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 11:40 pm

If I knew what "scherbenhaufen" means then I might be able to understand this piece better. Of course, if it means "suicide" then I'm back to square zero.

taltin traenenkind · Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 11:41 pm

loves heart is dead :*(

ToastyKen · junior member Member # Joined: 31 Mar 2001 Posts: 48

I don't actually know German, but according to the LEO Dictionary, "scherben" is "shards", while "haufen" is "heap". So it seems like it means "heaps of shards" or "heaps of broken glass". (Babelfish says: "heaps of piece of broken glass".)

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[666]Flat · Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2001 2:08 am

Du brauchst dringend �rztliche Behandlung, mein Freund.

horstenpeter · Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2001 2:41 am

...und das sagt ausgerechnet 666 Flat.

Death Dealer · Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2001 4:48 am

Du brauchst dringend �rztliche Behandlung!!! mein Freund.

sagt!

taltin traenenkind · Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2001 5:28 am

i think the translation is right
my heart is broken
hm
sounds awful in english but thats it

taltin traenenkind · Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2001 6:23 am

i changed it a bit
perhaps the brightest i ever did^^

[666]Flat · Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2001 7:31 am

Du hast �brigens "zerst�ren" falsch geschrieben, Du Nille!

[666]Flat · Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2001 7:35 am

Und sag jetzt nicht, Legasthenie sei Teil Deiner k�nstlerisch-kreativen Ausdrucksweise.

Das kauft Dir niemand hier ab - erst recht nicht ich, der Meister aller Klassen, der kongeniale Balance-Akrobat am Grat der Vollkommenheit, welche ihm durch die Fesseln des Irdischen verwehrt bleibt f�r immerdar in all ihrer bitteren S��e.

Magicman · Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2001 7:43 am

hey flat...it�s just a kind of art. i don�t like you�re pictures, but i never post that.
do the same...and yeah, do you know the word "tolerance"?

you post nearly ever cs or "i�m so lead" pics. is this the "real" kind of art, in your opinion?

i think art, unimportant which one...is a very good method to express the mind. ...do you know what i mean?

this is a forum the get help from amazing artists all over the world, and not a "i�m better than you"-contest.

taltin traenenkind · Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2001 10:12 am

stimmt flat es ist falsch geschrieben
es ist kein ausdruck meiner kunst
es ist ein schreibfehler

[666]Flat · Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2001 2:42 pm

quote:
Originally posted by Magicman:
hey flat...it�s just a kind of art. i don�t like you�re pictures, but i never post that.
do the same...and yeah, do you know the word "tolerance"?

you post nearly ever cs or "i�m so lead" pics. is this the "real" kind of art, in your opinion?

i think art, unimportant which one...is a very good method to express the mind. ...do you know what i mean?

this is a forum the get help from amazing artists all over the world, and not a "i�m better than you"-contest.

Relax, buddy! I didn't say I don't like this kinda art. In fact I see a beauty within this piece, hidden underneath the wings of terror.

Nevertheless, he does need psychological treatment. But then again, who does not? MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAAH*COUGH*HAHAHAHAHAHA.

k thnx bye

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[666]Flat · Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2001 2:46 pm

quote:
Originally posted by taltin traenenkind:
stimmt flat es ist falsch geschrieben
es ist kein ausdruck meiner kunst
es ist ein schreibfehler

Naja, jeder von uns macht Fehler, nicht wahr? Von mir mal abgesehen.

taltin traenenkind · Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2001 8:54 pm

stimmt deswegen beten wir dich auch alle an

S4Sb · Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2001 1:55 am

Flat: Warum zum Teufel postest Du hier bitte noch? Alle labern Dich an und bitten Dich wegzugehen, aber Du bleibst trotzdem hier. Ich mein, kennst Du das Wort "Ehrgef�hl"?

[666]Flat · Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2001 8:56 am

quote:
Originally posted by S4Sb:
Flat: Warum zum Teufel postest Du hier bitte noch? Alle labern Dich an und bitten Dich wegzugehen, aber Du bleibst trotzdem hier. Ich mein, kennst Du das Wort "Ehrgef�hl"?

Doch die schweigende Mehrheit verehrt mich als jenen G�ttersohn, der ich nunmal bin!

[edit note: Ehre hat noch nie jemandem geholfen, wu�test Du das nicht? Imperien sind daran gescheitert, Trag�dien wurden vom Zaun gebrochen, alles im Namen der Ehre. Wenn Du erlaubst, scheisse ich gekonnt im hohen Bogen auf alles, was Dir ehrenhaft und gut erscheint.]

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Magicman · Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2001 9:37 am

THIS IS NOT A GERMAN BOARD, DO YOU KNOW THAT...?!

Ich m�chte mal meine pers�nliche Ausnahme erbringen. Was denkst du...welche Auflagen muss ein Member dieses Forums erf�llen, damit er verbannt wird?

Wieso kannst du nicht einfach deine Meinung auf k�nstlerische Bemerkungen reduzieren, anstatt jedes mal pers�nlich zu werden?

Nehmen wir doch mal Taltin...wieso postest du in jedem seiner Threads provokant, ohne jedoch eine konstruktive Kritik abzuliefern?

S4Sb · Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2001 5:04 pm

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Es war 3 Uhr nachts als diese Nachricht entstand...sorry

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