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palladia mors member
Member # Joined: 08 Apr 2001 Posts: 177 Location: Oulu, Fin
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Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 5:26 am |
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he's yelling "wraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaghhhh!!"
...tried to make it powerful and expressive.
seemed like a good choice to leave it sketchy here and there....but dunno. anyway the pic:
like it or not? hehe. |
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Brain member
Member # Joined: 26 Oct 1999 Posts: 662 Location: Brisbane, Australia
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Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 6:55 am |
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This is indeed cool, though I'm not sure it's getting the powerful edge you want. It kinda looks like instead of "wraaaaaghhh", he's going "Mum!! Oh no! I didn't mean to! Honest!" @;-)
Make him look angrier by scruntching up his nose a bit and upturning it slightly. Also make his eyes less circular and more diamond-ish, like he's squinting, but angry-like. Have his eyebrows pointing downwards towards his nose, aswell as wrinkles on his forehead. Of course, all of this is if you want him to look like he's gonna do the same thing to you as he's doing to the sausage @;-)
I want to fear him!!! *grins* Keep up the good work! |
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Pigeon member
Member # Joined: 28 Jan 2000 Posts: 249 Location: Chicago
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Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 4:10 pm |
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nice textures and colors. Looks like wood stain over painted wood. How'd you get that? |
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Cicinimo member
Member # Joined: 03 Mar 2001 Posts: 705 Location: Seattle
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Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 4:45 pm |
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I really like your colors . But I can't help think ghandi trying to break his fast. |
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Rossimo member
Member # Joined: 14 Oct 2000 Posts: 59 Location: California, US
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Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 4:51 pm |
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Definately like the colors and style.
I'd have to agree that the impression I got from the guy's face mimmicks that of when my mom walks in on me naked...
Definately make him more angry, creases on forehead, less round eyes, etc. And something with the mouth is more scared than angry... |
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palladia mors member
Member # Joined: 08 Apr 2001 Posts: 177 Location: Oulu, Fin
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Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2001 11:46 pm |
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thx for the crits&comments. yep, I agree that the character doesn't look angry at all...but I'm too sick and tired of this piece so I'm going to leave it this way and maybe call it "Waaargh bad sausage" from this time forward. ?
umm...the texture on the wall was made from a wing of a bird-like creature I made and good old scribble. ![](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) |
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Ahcri member
Member # Joined: 23 Dec 2000 Posts: 559 Location: Victoria, B.C.
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Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2001 12:05 am |
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Nice background, I really like the texture on the wall, reminds me of the game Blood. Is it possible that it's suppose to warn us not to eat too much sausage? Because I'm sure this guy looks like he is having a heart attack..
Now, I think the sausage looks too hard, it almost seem like breadsticks. Secondly, I don't know why the sausages has blood coming out of them? |
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Akukage member
Member # Joined: 13 Oct 2001 Posts: 51 Location: SE Michigan
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Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2001 12:45 am |
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I like the shading style. The character reminds me of the zombies from the game "Blood" |
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