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Topic : "At The Play Tree.......A pic for my Mom" |
Blitz
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 Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 4:12 am |
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hehe
Really tired right now...
Ill make this short...
This was done for my mom for her Birthday...
I do hope you enjoy the pic..
For the Pencil
The Pencil Sketch...Tada!
The final Piece
At The Play Tree
Seeyas Sijuners |
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K-RuzH
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| Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 6:51 am |
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cute 
very nice colors too, im sure your mom will like it |
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Skeezer
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| Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 5:40 pm |
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Damn, that's beautiful...bastard, when did you get so good
Only thing I could critique is the anatomy on the fairies, something that could be worked on a bit, but they have good proportions.
Great job anyway,
-Isaac |
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Poprocksz
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| Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 6:44 pm |
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well you were saying ya wanted to do less ugly monsters
and you did a good job brother.
I agree with Skeezer about the anatomy partly.
The Fairie in the tree is what should be fixed a little.
He just seems a little blurred and under-finished.
just my opinion man.
get in touch with me you bastard. |
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Jezebel
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| Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 6:52 pm |
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Gaaah Blitz, this is so adorable (as I already mentioned elsewhere  )
I just realized something that pops out at me though. It'd be nice is there were some sort of middle ground or a more obvious background in the image. Right now it's all right out front. But what you have in the front is gorgeous. I really love the speckledy flowers on the ground and the bark on the tree. This is a good piece from you |
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eric_morrell
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| Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 7:10 pm |
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| I enjoy that picture thouroly (spelling?)! |
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swampbug
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| Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 8:02 pm |
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Nice picture.. The definations of shapes and details are great.. but honestly.. I am distracted by the color composition.
A brighter.. more saturated picturew ould naturally look more "playful"
What stands out the most for me is how dark the bottom of the picture is. the picture is TOO weighted at the bottom. Dark hollow in the tree with a lad you can hardly see. My eyes just go to the top of the tree in the light where it's easiest on my eyes. My eyes wanted to look at the kiddie ontop the branch. shes nice and bright, and in the open.
Maybe you can more evenly light the scene?
good pic though.. |
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daz199
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| Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 8:02 pm |
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i did a portrait of my mom for her birthday
she said it didn't look like her so she threw it away
heh |
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Poprocksz
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| Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 8:44 pm |
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Malachi Maloney
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| Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 10:11 pm |
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Great job Blitz.
It's like a Countrytime commercial, only with fairies.
Take it easy,
MDM |
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Poprocksz
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| Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2001 7:25 pm |
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sacrelicious
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| Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2001 10:48 pm |
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T-H-O-R-O-U-G-H-L-Y.
Great pic Blitz! |
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