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Blue boy · Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2001 2:31 pm

clue she liks fast cars and dungons...

Icannon · Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2001 3:13 pm

why, that's my very self. you might want to enlarge the nose and add glasses. the hair i can live with.

or it could be angelina jolie, but i have my doubts.

jcterminal · Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2001 3:14 pm

she also likes to make modem users cry too, apparently.

NextGen · member Member # Joined: 24 Apr 2001 Posts: 149

Icannon: i think your right. angelina jolie I mean its those Pantent HUGE lips that make her ^_^

Fast cars = Gone in 60 seconds
dungons = Tomb Raider (?)

Radiater · Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2001 6:34 pm

Blueboy,

Quick crit: Everything in her face is so smooth except for those wrinkles on her forehead. Those wrinkles look too deep. Take some of the edge off of them and they won't distract from the rest of the picture.

The lips are nicely done and I like blue stuff on her face.

Also, I think your hair needs a few thinner strands in it. Especially at the end where it looks unfinished.

Radiater

Matt Elder · Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2001 10:49 pm

Yeah I can vaguely see the angelana jolie look but only in the lips. Generally the image is good but I think the nose is just too curved and something is bothering me about the forehead but I can't quite put my finger on it. I would try to have the neck a bit "fatter".

Otherwise its good.