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strib · Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 5:36 pm

thoughts and responses welcome and appreciated

strib · Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 5:41 pm

thought I should show the full composition a little better..so here it is:

[ October 10, 2001: Message edited by: Freddio ]

strib · Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 5:44 pm

yikess...my mistake. lets try this again:

Dryfire · Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 6:05 pm

Awesome, looks great
Awesome, looks great

Quasar · member Member # Joined: 01 Oct 2001 Posts: 355

Looks great man...real tight stuff...but do me a flavor..use that little edit function right above your posts to take out two of your pictures

The lizard dudes chest needs to work..like he needs a chest :P

[ October 10, 2001: Message edited by: Quasar ]

jcFIG · Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 11:41 pm

VEry sweet, post this at penciljack also. I'm sure people there would LOVE to see it. Penciljack Forum Later.

strib · Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2001 9:58 am

thanks for the feedback and kind words. I'll post new stuff, hopefully soon...and try to give some feedback to others.

Ahcri · Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2001 10:46 am

I love the details on the lizardman's skin. But its chest does look kind of flat, like he is wearing a lizard skin sweather inside that lab coat.

MrLuisDiaz · Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2001 12:24 pm

Looks fresh! I like the Lizard interpretation. And Spidey looks great.-----------Luis

LeChuck · Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2001 1:30 pm

Colors are too flat. Play with the curves in PhotoShop.

Pigeon · Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2001 1:58 pm

sweet. always nice to see a fresh interpretation.

I like the cropped image better. The wall in the background is freaking me out. The view of the figures suggests an extreme perspective, but the wall has a pretty flat perspective, maybe if you could make the lines of the bricks converge toward the bottom more dramatically, and also tilt the whole wall or image so the hard vertical is not so parallel to the picture plane. The shadows on the wall would be nicer I think if they were cast lower down, again emphasizing the downward view.

Hope that gives you some stuff to think about and play around with in this or future images.

Dean

Poprocksz · Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2001 2:01 pm

I like it alot, but I,m not sure about the Lizard,s head........

strib · Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2001 2:44 pm

about the crits: they're all good for the most part..I think I could go in lots of different directions with this image. Mainly, I think the next one will be a little more thought-out from the beginning. It's so easy to get caught in the moment, while you're playing with new tools - and forget to plan and sketch enough. About the colors, well here we disagree. I really didn't want extreme color. If you think it's flat, well so be it. On the Lizard's head, well I need a little more...please be specific. The perspective is probably a little off, but try and draw the scene past the borders, and tell me what you think. I think it would still work.. So, not a perfect image,,,but this definitely helps for next time.

kos.mandis · Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2001 11:35 pm

That's awesome!
Is that Zbrush?

strib · Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2001 11:57 pm

a little maya and photoshop, with some help from poser, for speed's sake.

itchi · Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2001 11:15 pm

wow that is very sweet! hopefully oneday i will get the courage (and motivation) to model and mao a figure. that is awesome!