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cybertoker2001
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My newest piece. 
You can see a tutorial of how I painted this piece here-
Tutorial
(It's the first tutorial I've ever made. )
Tell me what you think.
Take it easy,
CT2001
Also, I have a new web site. Check it out here-
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chip_artz
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| Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2001 4:53 pm |
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| nice pics and tutorial >>> i think you should post the reference photos too. |
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cybertoker2001
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| Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2001 5:21 pm |
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I DID post the ref pic. It's the first pic in the tutorial.
Check out the tutorial again and pay more attention this time.
Take it easy,
CT2001 |
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KiNgStiNg
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| Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2001 5:29 pm |
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that is one of the nicest *pin ups* i have ever seen.....you are truly an amazing artist.....no crits only WOW
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| Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2001 5:40 pm |
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| I have seen her before i think.. don't know where... Anyways, good work =) |
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cybertoker2001
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| Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2001 5:44 pm |
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Thanx for the comments guys.
The model is Silvia Saint.
Take it easy,
CT2001 |
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cybertoker2001
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| Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 2:55 pm |
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Sorry for the bump........I just didn't want this to get lost in the flood of great new artwork.
I worked really hard on this and it's the first tutorial I've ever made. =/
So instead of playing "Mr. Cool" and letting this get lost in the suffle......I'd like one or two more comments.
If anyone has anything else to say that is. =/
Hope folks don't think I'm an ass for this.
Take it easy,
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| Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 3:57 pm |
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| well, the only part i dont like is the area around the eyes, like the eyelashes and eyelid and eyebrow. the eyelash looks way too chunky. the lip gloss is very nice and the lighting is beautiful. overall, extremely well done! |
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cybertoker2001
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| Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 4:10 pm |
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Thanx RoundEye.
Your opinion means a lot to me.
Thanx for the crit.
Take it easy,
CT2001 |
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chip_artz
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| Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 7:39 pm |
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| yeah good work i didn't notice the original cause it looks so much like the finished painting. you should also include in your tutorial the layer under your sketch/copy. |
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chip_artz
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| Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 7:42 pm |
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not tryin to start nothin but...
...dam your good. |
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cybertoker2001
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| Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 8:11 pm |
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Thanx.
Take it easy,
CT2001 |
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| Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 9:59 am |
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CyberToker!! you are my hero and quite possibly the most sexual painter i know. Awesome work! Keep it up
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Jezebel
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| Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 10:02 am |
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I gotta agree with what roundeye said... I think perhaps the eyelids are a bit too overdone with the makeup. It almost stands out at cartoony to me, everything else is extremely smooth and realistic.
Post your blue-eyed gal.. I like her a lot =)
Nice work. |
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cybertoker2001
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| Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 10:30 am |
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Thanx guys.
Nick~
Thanx for the comments bro. How you been? Ain't seen you for a while. Is that comic working out for you?
Take it easy,
CT2001 |
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| Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 10:42 am |
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Thats great cybertoker. I love the soap, very well done. I agree with roundeye about the lashes though.
On a side note, Why is it people feel the need to make little animated gifs starting with reference photos and ending with the painting? What are you trying to prove? In this case he was trying to 'redo' the reference photo and the fact that it matches very weel only says to me that he accomplished his goal. There isn't always some conspiracy to fool you into thinking someone painted something that they didnt. |
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| Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 10:46 am |
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| I think your choice of reference has too much saturated color and and lack of good 'realist' points of view... hence people looking at the tut and not being able to tell that the first image is a photo... it looks painterly, so not the best for copying I guess... but you nailed it. |
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cybertoker2001
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| Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 10:59 am |
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Wow! 2 great comments from 2 great artists. I'm floating on air fellas.
And Fallen~
Dude, I was like "Oh my god! Fallen replied to my post!" When I saw that you had. You're one of my favoret artists. Thank you sooo much. I hope one day I'll be as good as you. Would it be ok with you you if I added a link to your site from mine?
Take it easy,
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| Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 4:03 pm |
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| looks good mate.. |
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cybertoker2001
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| Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 4:33 pm |
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| Thanx. |
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Sun Li
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| Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 11:08 pm |
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Hi guys!
Im as new as one gets, so I might just be deadwrong. But why take a picture that already looks "photoshop'ed" and redo it?
Nomatter how good the work is in this case, the photo is still better. The face in the photo has some more contrast to the neck, modeling her face more and giving her more caracter. Is it just me, or is'nt it a waste of time ?
Great paintwork anyway. |
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cybertoker2001
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| Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 11:14 pm |
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Thanx?
I'm not tying to be an ass, but I actually like my painting better than the photo. And I hate most of my work. I'm hyper criticle of it. But, in this case I'm proud of the results. I like my lips better and the hair better than the chick in the photo.
I worked very hard on this and I know it could be better, but as I said in my tut......I'm still learning.
Take it easy,
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| Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 12:11 am |
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| i dont see anyone mentionin this but to me the boob looks misplaced. a lil too far off to the left of her...like its gonna fall off lol and the makeup on the eyelids does look weird but it doesnt bother me really...EVERYTHING else looks really kick ass mostly the suds great job |
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| Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 7:25 am |
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| image looks great, specially the suds...but im with boob dood here..it looks kinda misplaced...might just be cos shes kinda lying down...sorta??..or mabey it might be cos u have more hair on her shoulder then in the reference??..i dunno...anywho..yeah..looks keew |
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cybertoker2001
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| Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 9:29 am |
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Thanx for the comments and the crits fellas.
As far as the breast is concerned, you have to take foreshortening into account here, because she is laying down somewhat.
Take it easy,
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| Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 9:40 am |
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I don't like picutres of nekkid chicks, but I must say you did a great job on her! Now this may have been in the origional, but fix the right side of her mouth. See that black line at the corner of her mouth and how it meets a the highlight of her skin right next to it? It makes her mouth look flat and like it doesn't properly meld into her face. Either refer back and find what is creating that disturbance (if anything) or delete the highlight there. Great stuff.
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cybertoker2001
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| Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 9:58 am |
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Thanx.
And I'm glad you like rice.
Take it easy,
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| Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 2:00 pm |
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Hell yeah, I like the lighting.
And whoever claimed that this is an overpaint, go check out the tutorial....  |
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cybertoker2001
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| Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 3:06 pm |
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Thanx.
(And thanx for mentioning the tut.)
CT2001 |
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Jason Manley
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| Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2001 2:53 pm |
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dont know if any of you noticed but that photo is so touched up before he even started that it looks almost like a painting.
its almost a painting of a painting.
I would rather see you do that to a velasquez or a sargent though so you can learn something other than how to copy.
nice effort though.
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