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eric_morrell
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 Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2001 3:23 pm |
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I don't know if anybody else is a huge fan but I've been reading Herblock since I could see. All tributes welcome
ERiC
*fixed the link
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Snyper
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| Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2001 4:49 pm |
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eric_morrell
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| Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2001 7:05 pm |
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I also did this one tonight and wanted some opinions on it. I know the perspective is way off but I more wanted thoughts on composition. 
Thanks, oh and other peoples tributes to Herblock would be awesome unless I'm the only fan. |
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jeffery
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| Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2001 11:56 pm |
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beautiful chunky style you've got in the pyramid painting.
it looks like you want the center of attention to be the person going into the pyramid, and yet the lighting & composition don't draw my eyes towards that. especially with backlighting and the silhouetted pyramid, you could get some much stronger lighting going on.
also as a quick fix to the perspective, and maybe a really interesting way to change the composition: it'd be cool if you tilted the horizon line to run a bit diagonally, from the top-left to the lower-right. i don't know if it would work, but if it did, it would add some motion to the picture. |
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