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Soliciouse
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Icannon
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 Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 3:28 pm |
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| the character looks stiff and the environment very bryce like. for compositions sake it would probably look better if the character was moved to the right a tad and up enough to see his feet enter the water. he's kind of shoved into the corner as it stands. |
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Matt Elder
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| Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 4:04 pm |
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The image is kewl and I like what you have goin' on here. The large head was very striking and the composition was unique (well I haven't seen stuff like this before but I could have my head in the sand). The tree behind the heads nose bothers me a little. I'm also thinking that the angle that we are looking at the character should be the same as the face... they seem to be slightly different and it seems noticable.
I would have to agree that the character looks a little stiff the background does seem a bit bryce-ish. I'm sure that is just 3D in general. Nice work though. |
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