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StormVermin · member Member # Joined: 13 May 2000 Posts: 252

Feel free to critique and comment. :P

ebrian · Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2001 11:41 pm

I like the pose, and beautiful legs. hehe=)

Laemtao · Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2001 1:40 am

Gee I dont why u havent gotten more responses yet. I really love the colors! It's so striking and demands attention. Her being a red head as well gives me a sense of her hot-headedness. Shes not someone to be triffled with ya?

nice.

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Mo

InsaneSpaghetti · Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2001 2:27 am

People like this girl above are usually a pain between the buttocks to deal with. Unpredictable, aggressive and probably a rough lovemate.

StormVermin · member Member # Joined: 13 May 2000 Posts: 252

Thanks!

EviLToYLeT · Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2001 12:38 pm

I'm not too fond of the drop shadow.... do a regular standard shadow under her feet instead

g:tech · Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2001 3:11 pm

EvilToylet:

Generally I agree with you. Drop shadows usually scream PHOTOSHOP

In this case, the image looked a lot better with the shadow. It separated the girl from the background. I thought about the flat shadow under her feet, but StormVermin and I decided to go with the full drop shadow.

Anyway, I was really pleased with the way SV's coloring turned out.

Nice job, bro.

peace,

Red Leader · Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2001 6:53 pm

I like the linework, I like the colors, however, there are problems with the anatomical shading

The neck shadow should not end at the necklace
the shadows on her breasts do not match the one on her skirt volumetrically. Right now you have them wrapping under her arms.
The shadow of her gold arm bands should be greener. Gold generally has a greenish core shadow
her eyelids and nose need to be casting shadows
Her collar bone needs a shadow.

I kind of like the drop shadow on this piece, it has a rave-design quality to it.

[ August 04, 2001: Message edited by: Red Leader ]

leat hacksaw · Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2001 10:41 pm

great idea and execution, but i agree with red leader. the breasts look, well, strange.

yeah, if that was fixed, then it would be a lot better. Better than it already is, anyways

[whoops, bad grammatical error there - caught it just in time

[ August 04, 2001: Message edited by: leat hacksaw ]

StormVermin · member Member # Joined: 13 May 2000 Posts: 252

In my defence, since I did the colouring and shading, the shadow does not stop at the necklace - you have to zoom in to see it (which is my fault), but it does continue down a little more than up over her left sholder.

As for her boobs, thanks!

MDXSI · Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 8:22 pm

Wierd Nubby Toes. Aside from that I like it. The drop shadow could cover more area by the necklace.

Nice.

Pat · Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 8:51 pm

Having the background the same color as her hair and belt is not a good idea. Using another color wold help to separate her from the background, eliminating the need for the dropshadow.

-Pat

Incubus · Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 6:52 am

Just great! I really like the style. Proportions and her pose are verrrry good too. The only tiny crit I have is the dropshadow. Some "real shadow" under her might look better.
Keep up the good work!

Vgta · Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 7:14 am

Very nice, she looks like a character that could be used on a Batman animated show.
Her right breast (our left) does look kinda weird.
Are you planning on adding a bkg?
what are you gonna use her for?