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minister
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 Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2001 11:19 pm |
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Spent about an hour here. Water and clouds are not my strong point. C&C is greatly appreciated!
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Imhotep
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| Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2001 11:30 pm |
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| I love it!!! The clouds look awesome, the really seem soft. The atmosphere of it - how it seems so surreal, is what I like about it so much. My only crit would be maybe sharpening up the water just a little bit and tone the shooting star down some. That's it for me, I really enjoy it. |
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minister
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| Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 4:05 pm |
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Comeon' peoples let me know what you think! It's valuable info! |
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Viridae
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| Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 6:19 pm |
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Oooooooooh...I love the top 3/4ths of it  . The bottom 1/4th of it seems a bit weird, a bit flat(?) |
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minister
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| Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 7:18 pm |
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Imhotep, Thanks for the crit! I see that you take your time to c&c alot of paintings and thats cool. For some reason I never get many crits when I post art. So the few I got is appreciated. I do see what you mean about the shooting star. I'm troubled by the water tho. The left side seems to be lacking but im not quite sure what to do.
Viridae, The bottom 1/4th does not have much depth you are right. I will work on that! Thanks! |
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Imhotep
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| Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 7:51 pm |
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Thanks!!! As for the left side, try putting in a subtle reflection of the shooting star. Still love it  . |
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