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Scott Keating junior member
Member # Joined: 05 Aug 2001 Posts: 6 Location: Canada
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Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 4:07 pm |
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Hi, I'm new here Figured I'd put something up. It's not completely finished, but I'm just adding little touches now. Any comments or criticisms are welcome. Thanks guys.
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Imhotep member
Member # Joined: 06 Jan 2001 Posts: 56 Location: Federal Way WA
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Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 5:33 pm |
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Like it, the sky is very nice and the concept is pretty cool. First, I'd try to kind of put more open sky in there. It seems a bit think and heavy. I'd just add darker blues from the top to the middle, and start showing a few faint stars at the top of the open sky.
The guy flying is very good; the anatomy has a few problems though. His head to quite large in comparison with his body. Also his muscles seem kind of "stringy." Sort of thin and long. The hair is a nice color, but it's sort of stiff and big. I'd lower on the skull up top and make if more loose. Just add more of it flying in the opposite direction he is. The wings are very cool, but if you bulked up on the feathers, they'd probably rock even more. Also his feet are sort of on the big side. Lastly, his shield is not a perfect circle, I dunno if this was on purpose or not but it'd add a nice touch to it. The colors are really nice, ground is very cool, and over all I really dig it. Awesome work!!! |
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Viridae member
Member # Joined: 26 Aug 2000 Posts: 73
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Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 5:52 pm |
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This looks good, but I think the skies could be softer and the feet a bit more defined. Otherwise it's coming along very well. |
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