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Author   Topic : "Lost Spaceman"
Superbug
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Joined: 12 Jul 2000
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2001 5:11 pm     Reply with quote
Hey, just finished this. Hope someone takes a look at it. took me 2hrs 34 mins 23 seconds

Here's a word of advice for people...plan your drawings. Holy crap I would have had this done sooner, but I kept going and changing the guy. It was insane.

Anywho, enuf blab. please crit.
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Dustin Brown
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Joined: 26 Jul 2001
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2001 5:26 pm     Reply with quote
I really like this. A few suggestions: Thin out his neck a bit, and add some more detail to some areas like the pants, cape, hands, etc.

very nice,
dustin
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n8
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2001 11:19 pm     Reply with quote
nice concept..nice choice of colours...but you might want to seperate or define the clothes more?..they look too confusing from the shoulders down...you can try do this with lighter lights and darker darks...or mabey just stronger shadows...just mabey...other than that..its pretty nice
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Superbug
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 9:51 am     Reply with quote
Hey thanks for the comments guys

About the pic though. I had the coolest idea, but man, did I ever plan it bad. As a result, it the main character just didn't turn out probably. I lost detail, and color because I got so frustrated with the pants area, as well as his hands.

That just goes to show...one should plan their drawings a lot better!!

I was pretty pleased with the mountains and background, but, the guy just didn't turn out well. I should use finer lines for the inking too, not soo big and ugly.
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