[wolf]

Hi all ,
all done in one hour, with my tablet and Photoshop...i was inspired by a tv series with nice girls and muscle mens....web page

[wolf]

here is the pic...i did a mystake with the instant UBB code...I'm new here, be indulgent

[ July 30, 2001: Message edited by: wolf ]

[CapnPyro]

very cool! i like the spontaneousness (that a word?) of it

[shahar2k]

sponteneity

[hamilton]

argh... BOO!!! i visibly boo you. did you want a critique? it could be better. if you didn't... then what do you want? to show us that in an hour you can produce something that is subpar? BOOOO!!!

in critiquing this, i think that you need to spend way more time on it. it's very sketchy (and not in a good way) in an unfinished way. why is there red on her back? the sun does not cast a red glare (even though you might have drawn it that way... it doesn't happen) is there a neon sign behind her? what? the hair is EXTREMELY unfinished. and again... the red... what's with the red?

by telling us you made this in less than an hour... you immmediately say that it is not you best work. you imply that you rushed it, and therefore it is obvious that it needs a lot more work. BOOO!!! don't post these. go back and finish it.

make the lines finished. or give it a painterly feel. one or the other. having sketchy lines is raggedy. why is one eye surrounded by yellow and one eye by red? what's with that? with women, it's always a better idea to minimize the mouth. having that long middle line adds... something sinister to her. (look up sinister)

all in all you have something that could go somewhere, but should have been posted in the works in progress forum.

and drawing half naked women is not hard. anyone can do that. put some clothing on her, a flowing robe perhaps, and then you will have proven something.

[ July 26, 2001: Message edited by: hamilton ]

[S4Sb]

spontaneity


Love it! It's great! very fluid lines!

[Kallen]

Not bad for a quick sketch. The background would look better smeared a bit or if you are doing this as a toon sketch a solid color. Sun should have some color. I hope you finish this. I would like to see it done.

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[wolf]

Thanks all for you comments...
i need to replace the contexte of this picture, more for Hamilton who seems to not understand the principe of this forum... "more help than more mockerie"... I saw your site man and he makes me laugh..it's so puerile...start to know drawn and be indulgent with the other before starting to give lessons like this...
so for the other, thanks for you comments, i know i choosed a simple and stupid model, but it's my first drawn with a tablet! I would to be more clean and exaclty in the future. (Excuse my english, but i'm learning...like the drawn)

[BUMassedBIG]

I seem to have a liking-ness to 1/2 finished colour work. The hair looks excellent like that, but the rest of the picture doesn't suit the style of the hair and vice-versa.
Even though it is unfinished, I cant help ignore the fact her breasts seems to be hairy
The pose was taken from This page right here, it still makes me wonder why it took ~1hour, too long for such a picture I reckon. Still nice sketch though.

[Lapjos]

hihi, i love this pic especially its unique sketchy look ... somehow I think hamilton a raison..anyboy (ok, except me ) might draw nekkid women but not a face impressive like this one...oh I love this face!!! Her face!!! It's so beautiful.........could you please post a hi-res version of her face. merci beaucoup wolfilein

peace

[Frosted Flame]

I agree.

Hamilton, who the hell do you think you are? I've been to your page too, and you have NO MERIT. Your "advice" isn't worthy of the time it takes me to read it. Your "critiques" come in the form of insults. This is NOT the first time you've done this. Your ego needs some serious squashing. You think you're hot shit, but really, you're cold piss.

[necrofiche]

Wow, the people here sure have short memories. Observe:

http://www.notoart.com/illus.html

http://www.sijun.com/cgi-bin/ultimatebb.cgi?ubb=get_topic&f=5&t=004241

Next.

[ July 30, 2001: Message edited by: necrofiche ]

[hamilton]

now that we've established that this guy stole this drawing, i feel justified in moving the commentary towards myself. what does the way 'I' draw on 'MY' site have ANYTHING to do with how i critique this guy. it doesn't. i could be a three year old and know that this drawing doesn't belong in the finished drawings section. i gave PLENTY of good advice in my critique. and at least i actually critiqued his drawing. all you did was flame me. who's the real jerk here? huh? and again. please, critique MY art in MY posts. not in someone else's. that's just rude.

[Tron]

i like your homepage, but the intro-site is a bit confusing: what is internet explorer 7.0?

[shahar2k]

heh well, I'd say I'm rather good with the spelling and grammerisms usually.... heh especially for being Israeli

[wolf]

Sincere apologies

I need to explain me and defend my opinion. First i repeat it, i'm not the author of this pin-up!! Really, it's true!
I'm french student in university, where i prepare an option for become Ingeneer. I don't have computer at home, i surf here, in the hostels of students. I share this computer with 20, 50, 100 students, i don't know, and i suppose he surfed on this plattform with my cookies and nickname, because i never need to log...
+ i have a link to a website in my log status, and it's not me! I have got not site. Wolfweb it's not me! I don't know to do this.
Ok, i think this explication will not satisfy everybody and looks stupid. I ask webmaster to delete my wolf status and me from this forum, and i deleted the pictures.
I don't know how to be more excuse from this mystake...
Sorry again for the artist who was plaggied...

[Ben Barker]

[ July 31, 2001: Message edited by: Ben Barker ]