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egerie · Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 3:15 pm

I'm suprised not to see any more comments on this. I really like it.
On that first pic maybe putting the car in a different way would've helped break the regularity of the scene. Btw, your composition lead my eye right there..
The second one is also very nice. Are you going to color it ? Is it a comic in the works ?
Congrats

-ege

Deceiving Angel · junior member Member # Joined: 18 Jul 2001 Posts: 9

it doesnt work for me

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Shirotsugh · Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 5:44 pm

Brinkster really sucks. -_-

zeno80 · Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 8:47 pm

Thnanks for the positive comments guys. Just changed the server- damn that Brinkster to hell!

yeah I wasn't really happy with the first one- its got some perspective problems.

Felaxx · Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 8:53 pm

sweet. I really like this. You HAVE to ink this in a nice stark black and white... you hear me? HAVE to hehe and check out the work of my friend. She's done street scenes in perspective with pretty asian people in it as well, in a similar style no less! Check her out: no fish entertainment

Matthias · Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 9:41 pm

totally sweet

except 2nd pic guys hand in pocket. the pocket doesnt look right

zeno80 · Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 11:20 pm

Lately I've been trying to work on my background and perpesctive work. These two pics are my latest attempts. Please tell me what you think. Thanks in advance.

[ July 28, 2001: Message edited by: zeno80 ]

Golongria · Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 11:30 pm

hi there...I really really dig that perspective on the bottom one, and the line art in both is very crisp and very good...two thumbs up...

DarkBlade · Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 11:39 pm

Impressive... most impressive.

Your figures are proportioned well and the clothing looks right.

The perspective looks great. You have very good attention to detail, but don't have so many details that it clutters and overpowers the image.

You've also got good line quality.

zeno80 · Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2001 5:19 pm

thanks for all the positive comments guys. These pics are for a comic that im dying to self publish in Australia with a print run of about 100 (just basically for me, friends and as aportfolio thing). Im actually studying to be a journalist, so this comic thingy is one way of leaving my options open. I checked out no fish entertainment, wow whoever did that stuff is truly talented I think its a little above and beyond my work.

RayKast · Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2001 6:37 pm

hello zeno80, you havent played the game shenmue have you? just asking.

zeno80 · Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 12:45 am

yeah i have played that game- in fact i bought a dreamcast solely to play that game, needless to say i love it (can't wait for shenmue 2). Why do you ask?