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vegeta�ONAC · Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 11:47 pm

well this took me forever to finish like i was a retard or sumpin....its my first official colorin job in photoshop i just am curious for input (not that ill change it)

if this link doesnt work just let me know cuz my other one didnt and it makes me mad.....what ways can i display my art in the actual forums? anyways here it is....maybe

vegeta�ONAC · Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 11:50 pm

AHHH DAMMIT!!! it didnt work....just copy this friggin link and paste it in yur search bar sorry for the inconvenience -_-'
http://communities.msn.com/ADAMANDHISPEOPLE/myportfolio.msnw?action=ShowPhoto&PhotoID=160

cybertoker2001 · Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2001 12:23 am

You've got some serious anatomy issues to work out here bro.
Sorry I don't have the time right now to explain......
Maybe someone else would be so kind as to help you with this.
If not......I'll come back later.

Take it easy,
CT2001

Laemtao · Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2001 1:39 am

errm.. how do i start. When cybertoker said u had anatomy issues... he wasnt kidding. first off.. your exageration on his chest/pecs is too disproportioned.. its bulging out like its something foreign from its body.. it doesnt look like its part of the body at all. And erm.. whats that 3 bulges right below the pecks?? i never seen it before on any anatomy.. sorry if i sound a bit harsh.. but.. try getting yourself some referrence.. try getting hold of some bodybuilding mags for referrence.. better yet.. get books like Burne Hogarths anatomy/life drawing books and learn the basics.. It will really really help in the long run.
the hands also needs work.. i mean rather the forearms. i dont think muscles on the forearm look like that. again.. check for referrences on arms. The Face of the char lacks definition.. seems very flat.. u might want to place more definition to it.. I dont see any shadows at all on the face. whereas the rest of him gets shadows. u might also think of where the light is coming from to define where your shadows should fall.

Keep At it.. nothing is ever ez with art.. it only seems ez after u put thousands of hours of practice.

Good luck
---------
mo

vegeta�ONAC · Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2001 2:49 pm

thanks all for the input not that im goin to change any of the shit u discussed but i do see yur points and will probably take them into account in my future pieces. and i am no newbie to art mind u ive done for at least 6 years and had 2 years of college so i do know about anatomy i just was addin my own style and features.

EviLToYLeT · Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2001 9:34 pm

..... heh... i would comment on this .... but heh...

"i've taken shits for 16 years..... but does that mean my shit smells better, comes out faster, looks better than everyone elses?"

vegeta�ONAC · Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2001 11:17 pm

hmmm yes very uhhh original....anyways....all i wanted was a lil crit and i got one (cept for that last comment...by the way if u stop eatin ding dongs and twizzlers all day yur shit wont look dat way

*GLEEM!*) thanks again

Radiater · Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2001 11:36 pm

I think it has an interesting aspect to it. It looks like he has implants - especially those pecs! Kinda cool that way.

Rad.

InsaneSpaghetti · Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2001 12:01 am

Should be less blurry, imho. Now it really looks like a newbie colouring job (no offense, of course, seeing as you've done the hands outlines very good).