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SameOldShit · Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 12:29 pm

tear this stuff up...make me cry!

This is an older one...pencil/ink/ruler

pencil done at the hospital with a broken ankle!

Actually colour in real life...used for a flyer/poster/magazine ads

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Glondus · Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 7:33 pm

These are pretty good. I like the concept of the first one, pretty Esherish.
The third one is really nice, cool colors and everything.. and its Kinky!

But the face has issues.
The left eye is way off compared to the right, sitting too far from her nose and its bent upward too much. And by making that thing under her nose, above her lips, whatever its called makes her look sort of old... the nose contributes to this too, I think...
Why does she only have one boot on?

KiNgStiNg · Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 8:31 pm

i like the 1st one...its trippy

Visigothan · Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 8:50 pm

I love the first one...Nice attention to detail.

Matt Elder · Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 9:02 pm

The first one is cool as others have mentioned. I really like the colours in the chick one and reminds me a little of one of Dhab's old images on this site (I've got no idea who or what it is so maybe you are talking the original idea from the same place - or I'm just wrong). I think the blue one could use a little more of a background and comments as above about the eye.

burn0ut · Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 9:02 pm

ohhh i love that last one

Bungee · Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2001 10:28 am

Not an artist, so don't know Jack. But think your stuff kicks ass!