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Zekie · Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2001 8:48 am

Something I did about 3 months ago. I thought of working on dynamic poses, but I guess my attempts kinda screwed up. Anyhow, I would love some comments.

I think this belongs in the WIP section, but it could pass as a sketch. lol. gestural sketch.

Awetopsy · Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2001 8:51 am

actually i really like it.. its a great dynamic pose. my only crit would be that the extended arm is a little short.. but its barely noticable.. I really like it..

Vgta · Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2001 10:19 am

OH sweet, just a little tip, that is if you want to go back and finish this. The pose seems to be the recoil from the blast of his gun; if so I would make the gun a tad bigger and his left leg not as angled as you have it, or maybe change the angle of the right leg.
I like that pose.
I don't think the bullets would make enough drag in the air to push his jacket that far back.
Oh yeah, his right arm was a little hard to read at first.
Kick ass work man

[ July 24, 2001: Message edited by: Vgta ]

Democritus · Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2001 10:24 am

looks really awesome, zekie.

I fear that sketch is better than any of my "finished" things.

I just love that action anime style.

Dryfire · Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2001 10:27 am

that looks cool man.. line thickness i think looks great... good job

BakaSan · Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2001 8:54 pm

Wow, its not Ann! jk, but i really like your stuff. the pose here looks pretty cool, but a little awkward.

Freddio · Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2001 10:27 pm

wow!

you have a heap of talent

gekitsu · Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 8:56 am

i agree with all said above.

really fine

what i got used to when drawing motion and dynamic stuff, i try to fit the lines of the character to a "grid" of movement lines. fro example, if the guy above has just drawn his gun and is throwing his arm towards the enemy, i would make the arm slightly curved upwards. if he just fired the gun and the impact brings the motion, there are two ways, his body could react: the gun with his hand on it may be thrown backwards over his head or, what would be the case here move straight backwards or slightly downwards (where he would catch the impuls with his whole body) therefore, i had curved his body like an arrow with the arrow tip at his shoulder where the impact pulls back his body. or, if the gun moves slightly downwards, the same with a light curved arm...

understand what i mean?
nevertheles, a very nice picture

Nanimo · Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 9:04 am

i realy love your art

i visited your homepage, and i love it all

keep up the good work !