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Zekie
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 Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2001 10:24 pm |
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Just a B/W drawing of a female. I was experiementing with black and white to familiar myself with the tone and lighting.. The drawing isnt all that great, and the coloring seems to need more work.
I would love to hear some tips, comments and some critiques.. be as abusive if you want to be.. It is just a great enlightment for me to improve in some parts. |
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Zekie
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| Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2001 10:26 pm |
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My Bad.. here is the working Link.
I apologize for the mistake. |
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Jucas
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| Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2001 10:38 pm |
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I like the personal note:
"I forgot what you GF looked like."
Cracks me up. Anyways, looking good  , anonotomy looks good to me, except where is her right arm? You could make her arms crossed... |
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Matthias
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| Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2001 10:49 pm |
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mmmmmm =]
so full, and supple |
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SolidSnake
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| Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2001 10:54 pm |
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um.......nice (^_^).........I think it's beautiful.....
Yong |
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Zekie
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| Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2001 11:32 pm |
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| DOh... i knew i forgot about something.. lol. I was about to draw the other hand... but completely forgot.. and i cant really go back to it anymore. oh well. thank you for all your comments.. I would appreciate some more. |
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dr . bang
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| Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 12:22 am |
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| oh my, beautiful hair! |
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BakaSan
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| Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 1:55 am |
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dr. bang: its the hair you coment on?!
but actually i agree. the whole thing is pretty beautiful. |
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shahar2k
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| Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 2:31 am |
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I've been seeing a lot ofyou on the board here, nice work man, try some other drawings than beutifull women, not that I'm complaining, hehe
btw I really like how you handle the lines and the quality of them, the variations in thickness give a good sense of weighting to the drawing. although one thing you should try is making the shadows either harsher in tone, or give them a softer edge, right now they seem very soft and at the same time sharp |
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itchi
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| Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 5:56 pm |
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nice work zekie! nice treatment on the ni....nip...ni... ah i cant bring myself to say it. nice man! nice hair, nice soft style, and i like the sort of roughness of the application. yeah like someone had said, the hand...... hehe
-sam http://www.geocities.com/itch_studios/ |
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mad
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| Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 11:10 pm |
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| nice image, and caption. there's nothing to really comment on besides the lack of a right arm, which has already been brought up. looking forward to more. |
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Vgta
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| Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 11:32 pm |
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| Very nice, I like some of your bishoujo stuff on your site as well. Did I spell that right?? |
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