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jasonN · Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2001 7:03 pm

hey people. I posted this up in the WIP a few days ago. I tried to take everyones advice. So thanks to those people.
Any crit or comments welcome.

burn0ut · Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2001 7:06 pm

well.. damn i gota say i really liked the feelin in your WIP, i Really liked how his hand was and the longer sword, but anyways.. nice job jasonN

Dryfire · Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2001 7:08 pm

THAT is NICE man, i'm loving the red light from below.. really great man.. looks really cool

Rinaldo · Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2001 10:33 pm

Looking good. nice lighting.

I didn't get a chance to see it in the WIP forum. but one thing that strikes me is the size of the hands. they are not really to small. but some bigger and more chunky hands would have complemented his charater IMHO. bigger and broader.

Freddio · Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2001 1:16 am

Awesome Jason

This pic is really cool..

I like the way you did the folds in his clothes

Gordillo · Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2001 3:35 am

Very cool pic,only a suggestion,try to add some highlights to the edges, the material of the spear looks a bit matte for me.

dr . bang · Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2001 4:02 am

I just absolutely LOVE this picture Jason! I went through your page and see that you're only around 16 years old. Work like this are amazing for ppl around your age....keep praticing and you'll be a genious at art someday!

badoli · Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2001 5:56 am

u'r just 16 years old? And that good? Man, i am envy... ;-)

Nothing to complain about that. Maybe the text is a bit too much... the guy looks very good.

Keep on working! You are on the very right way!

Freddio · Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2001 6:03 am

Yes this dude is good

green.7 · Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2001 7:05 am

wow, so big chinese , awesome.
good work.

Bishop_Six · Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2001 8:00 am

That is one big chinese dude. Very nice, man. Something about his hands seems kinda whacked, but hands aren't the easiest part of the body to do. Great work!

jasonN · Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2001 3:34 pm

burnOut: Hey yo, thanks dude

To be honest, the hand in it's previous position was really screwing with me and so I changed it. As for the longer blade, well, I was afraid it'd look way too big and 'out of proportion' so I made it smaller.
Dryfire, thank you! I really love ambient light

Rinaldo: wow thanks. I actually wanted to give him larger hands but I was afraid of being criticised for them being too large. Oh the irony.
hugh: Thanks heaps, the folds were the hardest part!

Gordillo: thank you, yeah the texture of the blade was very hard and I'm still not satisfied with it. I tried adding more white, but it still didn't look shiny and real. Maybe I need to add more texture?
dr. bang: Wow thanks

I actually turned 17 a couple of months ago

badoili: thank you, yes I was unsure about the text. What I really wanted was to put his name in chinese, but I absolutely suck at calligraphy :P
Hugh:

green.7: thank you
Bishop_Six: thanks, I rekon the hand that is holding the weapon is really whacked, he's just not grasping it as tightly as he should. dunno how to fix it though?

Kallen · Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2001 3:40 pm

This is very well done. The light from below is spectacular. Nice effect to use. The pose and proportions seem to right on target. Great work.

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Kay Allen - Artist of RealmsQuest

schabe · Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2001 5:12 pm

yes great pic.

jasonN · Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2001 8:34 pm

Thanks kallen, I was really worried about the proportions on this one

Thank you schabe

JOYSUKE · Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2001 12:44 am

HEY JASON! Your Guan Yu is GREAT!!! He is my hero!!!