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kaosAD
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 Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2001 3:17 am |
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First off: Well done dhab.. but why was there a little thing on top saying host: www.maxforums.org not authorized ????
well, this image are not finished, but since i will probably not work on them anymore i am posting them in here...
i did get the idea from an image on http://www.3d-io.com/ it was only a test image i did to expand my skills, they really need expanding.......
I know that there is some things i need to sort out with the grass i used, it tiles on the left of the image...
can i have a good honest crit please....
I am going to do up an image using what i learned from this excersise, there will be a structure, a character, and lots of nice foliage in it.... but since i was working on a little job for a friend for the last 2 weeks in my spare time i will probably take about a week away from the computer to spend with my girlfriend and our 3 year old....
well anyway here is the image:  |
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MunkY c mUnkY Du
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| Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2001 3:26 am |
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| i think its great... emm im no expert on 3d renders but it looks good it has a plastic/claymodel feel which is nice and i cant see any modelling flaws... maybe the lighting is a bit harsh but if everyone one stuck to the laws of 3d lighting it would become boring quite quickly... tree mendose work |
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Donnie_brasco
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| Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2001 4:17 am |
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 What can i say! Really good mate. Reminds me of the Oddworld series of games! Keep up the good work, textures are sweet. |
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steone
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| Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2001 4:57 am |
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| Hmmm, I like it! |
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silber
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| Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2001 10:10 am |
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me likes too
the grass looks good too IMO
the shadows on the building are a bit too strong |
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JammyB
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| Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2001 10:22 am |
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The only thing that looks bad to me is that the building needs some kind of weathering and erosion effects on it because, as MunkY said it looks a bit plasticy.
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Originally posted by kaosAD:
i did to expand my skills, they really need expanding.......
That however is just BS  excellent work if I do say so myself. |
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