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nickmarksdotcom member
Member # Joined: 17 Feb 2001 Posts: 244
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 9:26 pm |
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No this isn't dune art but it is about a dream. I finally got the second page to this sequence done. I am pretty happy with the way it turned out. It wouldn't have turned out so well if not for the help of the Work IN Progress board on Sijun. Much thanks Feebsaint and the crew.
The narration is really going to bump the scene up. Hopefully I will have that laid in by the end of the week. Hope you all like this. Let me know if ya think it works.
Here is the second page in the sequence followed by the first.
This page actually comes after this page...
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ime member
Member # Joined: 08 Jul 2000 Posts: 156 Location: Estonia
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 9:54 pm |
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wow |
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ShinShot member
Member # Joined: 20 Sep 2000 Posts: 70 Location: Tustin, CA
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 10:03 pm |
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Here in sequence followed by the first?
I was completely lost looking at the first followed by the second, but then the second tied in the third so well when my wandering eye looked east when I stood on my head with my hands.
All kidding aside, the first (second image) has good rythym and leads well into the second page, but posting the second before the first, I was completely confused at what I was looking at. Then again, dead mutated babies aside, maybe that was what you were after? wtf are MY dreams all about anyway? As much as I find some of your pieces disturbing, I equally find them intriguing and thought provoking. You're pushing boundaries that I would...
Oh Shit! Am I getting tired?
Noooo!!! |
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topeira member
Member # Joined: 07 Feb 2001 Posts: 553 Location: Holon, Israel
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 10:09 pm |
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i think this is just fantastic!! i realy really love this! great colors and kinda beatlejuice atmosphere to it. really surreal and weird. great one! i especially like the first one. that is the second pic. i mean the second here but first in idea. i mean the lower post... i mean... u see how it is confusing??
anyway - does it have more pages? post them in a new thread. i love this kind of stuff |
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Ahcri member
Member # Joined: 23 Dec 2000 Posts: 559 Location: Victoria, B.C.
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 11:08 pm |
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They're perfect! |
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nickmarksdotcom member
Member # Joined: 17 Feb 2001 Posts: 244
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 11:12 pm |
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I about split a gut Shinshot laughing. I have been up for almost a day and just didn't write my directions to well. Sorry. It made sense to me at the time. Most of you guys have already seen the second pic so I posted the other one first. Get it? hahaha.
Glad you think I am pushing boundaries...that is what I am all about. If I am going to do a comic, I am going to do it my way and not conform to some preconcieved image of what a comicbook needs to be or look like.
topeira: Try this link on for size. It has almost all the peices I have done for the comic on it. Not alot have narration though...but they are in order hehe
http://www.nickmarks.com/comic/FrameSet.htm
IME: WOW back at ya...I checked out your werid scanner photo..neat |
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feebsaint member
Member # Joined: 09 Jan 2001 Posts: 353 Location: West Valley City, Utah, USA
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 11:14 pm |
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(say with rolled r's)
BRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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burn0ut member
Member # Joined: 18 Apr 2000 Posts: 1645 Location: california
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 11:25 pm |
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what the hell... thats turning out VERY good nick! i want a copy when its finished :P |
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Vesuvius member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2001 Posts: 718 Location: Newton, Ma, USA
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Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2001 3:05 am |
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the second (sequence wise, first posted) I believe is supposed to be so crazy and confusing to portray it being a nightmare and to show the confusion of the dreamer. I prefer it to the first (sequential) image, though they are both very well done. |
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Gordillo member
Member # Joined: 18 May 2000 Posts: 308 Location: Guildford,UK
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Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2001 3:25 am |
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Cool!!very nightmarish. |
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exo13 member
Member # Joined: 31 May 2001 Posts: 243
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Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2001 8:10 am |
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Wow, It's almost photographic! |
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LordArioch member
Member # Joined: 14 Nov 2000 Posts: 173 Location: San Jose, CA USA
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Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2001 8:19 am |
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"awakened." There's no such word as "awoken."
Brought to you by the Spelling Police. |
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marky member
Member # Joined: 05 Jun 2001 Posts: 66 Location: London
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Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2001 8:31 am |
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Yes there is - "awoken" - everyone knows that - where have you been living? |
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exo13 member
Member # Joined: 31 May 2001 Posts: 243
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Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2001 9:19 am |
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forgive him, he hasn't awoken yet. |
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nickmarksdotcom member
Member # Joined: 17 Feb 2001 Posts: 244
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Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2001 9:36 am |
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Dictionary.com says...
a�wake (-wk)
v. a�woke, (-wk) or a�waked a�waked, or a�wok�en (-wkn) a�wak�ing, a�wakes
v. tr.
To rouse from sleep; waken.
To stir the interest of; excite.
To stir up (memories, for example).
sorry Lordarioch thanks for trying to help though.
Glad you all are diggin on it...
exo13: well some of it should look photographic considering I used photo's I took. But all the cards are 3D models made in 3Dsmax. |
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