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Psionic · Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 3:49 am

This is the finished pic of My "RoboDaemon" done entirely in PS except for the building things in the background which were done in Strata3d(a free 3d prog). Its my first pic using my new Wacom:Graphire and I really enjoyed doing it (especially compared to drawing with a mouse

) Anyway comments and crit welcome as always!

Psionic · Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 10:12 am

hello.....anybody out there?

Cos · Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 12:58 pm

hey psionic, it looks cool, neat character design. Makes me think of the zoanoids from guyver animated series which is cool.

Crit wise its abit confusing, kinda all meshes together. If u thought more about specific light sourcing it should help make it more solid... and more colour variation would be good too.

Also some areas look very cut and paste, dont be scared to be a little more messy and overlap some more while painting, should help bring it together more.

great start for your first with a wacom =)

SeriousGrandpa · Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 2:37 pm

Nice work! The RoboDeamon really looks mean

My only complain is that the image is too red... but that's probably what you wanted.

topeira · Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 10:41 pm

definatly a more solid light source. more shdows casted by his shouldres or axe should help to identify the light source. also i think that the water is not "quite" enough to have reflection. too much waves if u want a reflection that, in my opinion, can be ommited.
but i think the perspective of the water vs rocks is fine. and nice design.

dont drinkn and drive and dont dodge and burn

Snake Grunger · Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 11:49 pm

Hey, it's mister I-draw-over-saturated-with-red-drawings ! Nice to see you haven't given up that old bad habit of yours. :P (Hint: I just criticized your work.)

I also have a hard time figuring out where light is coming from, and how certain shapes are. Perspective on the floor is neat, but it doesn't match with the perspective on the tall red-rectangles (buildings?)

Psionic · Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2001 4:03 am

Thanks for all the comments and crit, very very helpful!!!! All totally valid points that I will take into consideration in my next piece. Thanks for checking it out.

No dodge and Burn in this, just airbrush