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Fallen
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 Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2001 1:05 pm |
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trying different lighting. 
(edit: sorry, afterthought...guess i coulda just added this to my 'pin-ups' thread. And that's 'frontal'..not forntal. :P )
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Gaxar
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| Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2001 1:43 pm |
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Preeeeeetty...
I especially like the lightning of the gloves, looks very realistic! The entire picture makes me very curious as to what her face would look like, and especially the hair. It would really change the picture if you could see her expression and hair color....hmmmm... *snaps out of it* Still, leaving it like that sure makes your imagination go wild.
Anyway, the only thing that bothers me slightly is the pose. Looks kind of... I don't know really, unnatural. Something about the positions of the arms, the twist of the left hand and the curve of her spine makes her look uncomfortably tense. If her head was lifted upwards, it would almost look like she was yawning. But maybe that's just me.
Blah blah.
Great piece anyhow, lovely lightning and smooth, gentle fleshtones. Though she shouldn't have gone on that diet... 
-Axel
The liver is evil. It must be punished. |
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Darkglade
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| Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2001 1:47 pm |
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Almost perfect...
...Her left hand/fingers seem unclear, and perhaps detailing the neck may help. Beautiful work. |
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Chapel
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| Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2001 8:55 pm |
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| No crits from me this time. Looks good. Nice runway. "shkkk.. you are clear for landing" |
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Matthias
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| Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2001 10:43 pm |
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| its great. Its odd though, the chin seems to be very very long.. |
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Socar MYLES
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| Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2001 11:06 pm |
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I love your work...I think this is one of your best. It has more of a 'fine art' feel than a lot of your other work. I also love the fact that you've got a definite background.
One little crit, though--her...ah...lips...seem a little undefined. Is that supposed to be a thin line of pubic hair? It's hard to tell whether that's hair, or just a rather-too-wide shadow.
Apart from that, though, it's great. I'm loving it. |
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swampbug
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| Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2001 12:04 am |
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I think it has great dynamics too.... Excellet idea having the arm and stem of flower lead my eyes directly at her nipple. Good choice! Super rendering also. No complaits at all. Fits your style anyways.
Only real advice maybe is next time, get a little spread eagle going when you do female frontal. Akkkkkkkc.... ok I'm kidding funs over. :P |
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