[SlightlyTwisted]

Little Girly, eyes so bright,
Scared to death of this sight.
Little Teddy, oh so sweet,
Hiding murder stains under your feet.
Little Girly, hair so fair,
Shitting in your underwear.
Little Teddy, oh so furry,
Sleeping off your blood drenched fury.
Little Girly must not cry,
Little Teddy will not die.
Little Girly won't survive.
Little Teddy is alive.



bleh. :P

[ June 21, 2001: Message edited by: SlightlyTwisted ]

[Socar MYLES]

I really like the way this turned out--and the nasty little verse, as well. Nice toes, by the way. Yes...this is definitely cool. Wish I'd thought of it....

I still think you should experiment with some starker highlights...a sickly yellow, maybe....

Great work.

[topeira]

you are not slightly swisted. this is heavily twisted. weird toes, palms too big but great fur and cool atmosphere. like

it looks like it's consisted of just 2 colors - yellow and grey

oh. whateva'.

[Enayla]

As I said before, I reaaaally like this =)

Wonderful poem, too =D

[mellowsmoothe]

cool. scary. uh, i think i sh*t my own undies. it seems as though she has six toes but she doesn't. maybe you could oush the toes together more and thin the ankle out a bit. hmmm...i think it would be cool too if the light source were more dynamic...maybe some more contrast...possible make it brighter with more illuminating highlights on the sujects. dope though.

[synj]

hehe that poem looks like some deathmetal song. neat. you created some really interesting atmosphere but why is the teddy's eye bleeding? hehe

seems like that little girl works out more than usual. those arms are pretty buff.

[SlightlyTwisted]

Ooh, comments.

Socar: Yeah, I know I should... but I'm a naughty little boy. Maybe I'll actually take some of the wonderful advice you spout out next time.

topeira:I'm only SlightlyTwisted, because there's always room for improvement.

You might be right about the colours... I didn't really notice that. I guess I just needed a quick break away from all the deep blues I usually put in backgrounds.

Enayla: Hehe. It popped into my head while I was falling asleep, this morning. Now that I'm more awake, I see how clumsy it is, but, oh well, I like it either way.

mellowsmoothe: *nods* I'm the first to admit that I need to pay more attention to both light sources and anatomy.

synj: For some utterly bizarre reason, I imagine Conan O'Brien reading it out. As for the eye... dunno. Seemed like a cool place to put a trickle of blood. Or is that strawberry juice?

[autobots transform]

This is very beautiful, yet disturbing. One thing, though, the leg closest in view looks weird (not just the toes). It needs clearer foreshortening, I think.

[Socar MYLES]

You don't get any more advice! You've used up your advice allowance for the month! *wink and nudge*

*Mellows* Unless you draw me a brain-eating zombie. I'd probably be well-disposed to giving advice if you drew a brain-eating zombie. Or another rat. More rats are always good.

(Hm...maybe a brain-eating zombie rat...? Perhaps I'll take that idea for myself!)

[davi]

i agree with the leg thing...
it think the ankle needs to be thinner.

[duhroach]

hum.. let's see. how to reply, how to reply.. hum..
How about "Holy shit"

yea, i think that's a good starting point

Seriously, great volume on the body and atmostphere to boot! I can't even point out any part that caught my eye, cause it all kicks ass.

~Main

[StatiK]

reminds me of Korn
I like it.

[ScoobyDoo]

well, I drew this months ago, but saw the topic and couldnt resist.


I really like the left hand, the pose, and the hair.

The whole image seems to scream
"Painted with the photoshop airbrush/smudge tool!!!!" though. Thats just a technique thing. My pictures often scream the same thing.


How about a second verse?

Little Teddy will not die,
Bares his fangs to make blood fly,
On the floor and on the walls,
blood is running down the halls,
in the carpet, in your hair,
sticky, icky everywhere.
I look around and I see red,
must mean everybodies dead.

But little teddy will not die,
Makes me want to whine and cry.
Little teddy looks so sweet,
but its you he wants to eat.
Makes me want to run and flee,
Little teddy's after me.

Crawling teddy, on all fours
smashing, crashing through the doors.
Faster and faster I must run,
Little Teddy's having fun.

Little teddy is on my leg,
"please oh please" I start to beg,
Little teddy does not hear,
he just starts to eat my ear.
Then he goes and chews my head
I guess that means I wind up DEAD!


[ June 21, 2001: Message edited by: ScoobyDoo ]

[Akolyte]

Well, isn't this sane? lol...

[SlightlyTwisted]

Korn? Please... I have better taste than that.

Hehe... that was good, ScoobyDoo.