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Socar MYLES
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 12:30 am     Reply with quote
40 minutes. Just for fun. Now, let's see if I can get more comments than Stneil for once! (Just kidding. No offense intended to Stneils living or dead...or something...er...I'll just shut up now, shall I?)

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 12:32 am     Reply with quote
Thats really nice. I can't see anything that needs fixing really. I like the leathery shirt she has on too.

[Edit] Oh! I remeber, lose the border.

[ June 12, 2001: Message edited by: Briareos ]
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Blitz
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 12:33 am     Reply with quote
Hey, she is pretty.
Very nicely done Socar.
She looks like she could Shatter like glass.

Verry cool
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 12:37 am     Reply with quote
Awesome...truly graceful..charming..elegant..what more can I say...I hate you .

Just kidding.

Kay.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 3:19 am     Reply with quote
nose looks a little weird, otherwise very nice
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 3:20 am     Reply with quote
this is a bonus reply to help you surpass the responses of a certain moron
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SlightlyTwisted
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 5:51 am     Reply with quote
Well, I've already commented on this over on Epilogue, but... 40 minutes? If this was 'just for fun', then we've really got to start getting you to have more fun, Socar, even if we have to force feed it to you.

I want more. *nods*
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 5:56 am     Reply with quote
Great as always socar...but I think (could just be me) that the eye to the left on the picture could/should be moved down a few pixels...
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 6:00 am     Reply with quote
Wow, very cool. But like MrPumpernickel
said there is something about the left eye. also the nose seems to be a tad offset with the lips.
Only 40min!!!?
and yeah I'd either get rid of the frame or fully frame her. Personal opinion though.
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Seph|roth
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 7:29 am     Reply with quote
Nice work there Socar !
Very smooth looking but theres something wrong with the nose..its looks kinda crooked or something..

Besides that, its a very nice piece of work

Good job, keep em coming

Cheers
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Bishop_Six
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 7:48 am     Reply with quote
Ooooh.. me likes this. I agree with twisted. More!
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 8:44 am     Reply with quote
Looks great SOCAR, apart from the shading on the face looks a little awkward, but considering you did it in only forty minutes ( ) it's not really that big of a deal.
A great piece, i also think you should do more!

[edit]typos

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Awetopsy
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 8:44 am     Reply with quote
She's beautiful Socar!

great work!! this is my absolute favorite work of yours.

[edit]bad spelling

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 8:49 am     Reply with quote
Socar,

I really like the clean style to this...

If I was going to give some crit it would be

The nose seems to bend too far at the bottom, disproportionate to the angle of her face. Her left eye (are right side) seems almost too grey.

I like the style.
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Socar MYLES
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 9:21 pm     Reply with quote
Yeah, that IS a pretty squonky nose, now that y'all mention it--I really ought to use photo-reference. Anyway, I was going for a 'feel' in this one, more than for realism (obviously), so I'm not going to bother changing it. But I will be more careful in that whole...er...nasal area, there...next time.

And also, thanks for all the compliments. I'm glad people like this.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 11:05 pm     Reply with quote
Great work Socar.
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LordArioch
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 11:36 pm     Reply with quote
Pretty cool, I like the slightly stylized works. Sort of Nagel-esque (in a 3D-rendered sort of way).
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 11:39 pm     Reply with quote
Usaully after 40 minutes my screen is still blank and I've erased whatever I was drawing and started all over again about 5 times.

I love those full lips. And what nice hair she has.

[Gimbal shakes himself out of a daze] Where was I? Oh yeah. Great work Socar. Now put a rat on her shoulder.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 19, 2001 1:06 pm     Reply with quote
Very nice work, Socar! She looks like porcelain.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 19, 2001 1:27 pm     Reply with quote
I guess I'm looking for some highlights on the face to kinda bring it out a bit. Otherwise, a suberbly professional looking piece of work. Nice one!
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 19, 2001 7:24 pm     Reply with quote
Wow! This is fantastic, Socar. It is definately one of my favourites from you.

The subdued colors introduced by the lips, the stark B&W shape design balanced by the soft greys. Beautiful, absolutely beautiful.

One thing that looks slightly off though is her nose. It looks a bit twisted and may need some more modelling. Apart from that minor imperfection though, this has taken my breath away.
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William H. Daniels
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2001 1:40 pm     Reply with quote
Very nice! And she bears no resemblance to either a rat or a heroin addict! I think it's cool to see someone working in monochrome for a change. It's too often that we hear, "I like that, but I'd like to see the color (read finished) version."
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2001 12:43 am     Reply with quote
her left eye is too bright and too small i think

other than that - great. 40 mins? godamn! can take me hours to do something less good than this. urr (bite my fist)
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2001 12:55 am     Reply with quote
The nose bothers me. Other than that, snot bad.
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