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Iman junior member
Member # Joined: 26 Apr 2001 Posts: 16 Location: Huddersfield - London UK
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Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2001 7:43 am |
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I dont think ive EVER posted anything here,... I've been an information leech and.. I feel kind of guilty.
The great work I see here keeps me truly motivated! ... keep up the great work and if you have any time for this mortal... please spare a few comments for my stuff.
my tiny online sketchbook is at Online Sketchbook my digital portrait of a special girl I know over the internet is at:Portrait
your comments are much appreciated...
xxx
Iman
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Awetopsy member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 3028 Location: Kelowna
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Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2001 8:03 am |
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I will say your site is very interesting.. you show alot of creativity. I like that you incorporate written arts and visual arts together. nice layout too.
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dr . bang member
Member # Joined: 07 Apr 2000 Posts: 1245 Location: Den Haag, Holland
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Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2001 8:08 am |
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I really like this piece, especillay the heart, work on it some more and give it to your gf (and prepare some tissues for her, just in case)
A suggestion though, i suggest you remove all those gradient and rectangle that is over her face and other stuff. They don't really match the picture as a whole, instead, add something more curvy, like bubbles..etc
I hope that helps
Oh yea, and Welcome to the board
[ June 18, 2001: Message edited by: dr . bang ] |
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Iman junior member
Member # Joined: 26 Apr 2001 Posts: 16 Location: Huddersfield - London UK
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Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2001 8:14 am |
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Noel this is incredible, I didnt think I'd get a response from you... I have to say your site certainly inspired me to do the online sketchy thing two weeks ago. I even mentioned your site at my review session as an example of a great online sketchbook.
thanks!
Iman
ps. love the new portraits! |
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Iman junior member
Member # Joined: 26 Apr 2001 Posts: 16 Location: Huddersfield - London UK
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Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2001 8:28 am |
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thanks dr. bang..
my friend already has that portrait, I sent it to her for valentines day.. but I agree about the gradient thing on her face, I wasnt too keen on it myself but I didnt quite know what else to substitute there as it looked like it needed something.
More curves I definately agree with! and bubbles would be fantastic. thanks for the suggestions, I'll bear them in mind when I do another portrait.
cheers
Iman |
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