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cybertoker2001 · Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 6:34 pm

I was advised that I should come here to show my work from the folks at polykarbon. So here I am and here's a recent piece of mine. Crit if you'ld like.
Take it easy.

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Gimbal8 · Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 6:53 pm

Picture doesn't load for me.

cybertoker2001 · Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 6:57 pm

No way. Don't know why.
Go Here~
http://cybertoker2001.xoasis.com/prettyinpink.jpg

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chip_artz · Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 7:13 pm

That's really hott are u gonna finish it or is it finished anyways it looks nice. It showed up for me. If you have a lot of these types of pictures you should go to Renderosity.com you can post em real big over there and people can rate your pics.

Gimbal8 · Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 5:03 am

Wow, that's really good. Nice comic book cover style coloring. Her calf dimensions look off but (too short?) but that may be because I can't see the rest of her foot to judge proportions better. This would be a good one to put in Fallen's Pin-Up thread.

patrick · Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 5:54 am

Something about her elbow looks wrong, it took me a minute to figure out thats what it was. maybe reposition the hair so that you can see better that its a bent arm??
Nice picture tho, if it werent for sexual harrassment rules, i'd have it as my wallpaper.

Chris Holden · junior member Member # Joined: 11 Jun 2001 Posts: 9

The only thing that bothers me about this image is that the one exposed breast looks like a bad implant due to the rounding highlight beside the upper left arm.

Salty Dog · Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 10:51 am

hmm..I agree with patrick. That mass of flesh below the pink hair doesn't look like anything anatomical to me. More like a tumor of some sort..even after squinting at it, I still can't figure it out. As for the rest, the face seems a little stretched, this almost looks like you went off of a ref pic of Anna Nicole Smith (fake breasts and all)

Also, there is such a strong highlight on the breast, there would also be that feel on the leg and arm as well (since they're closer to the light source.)

Other than that, nice feel, it's hard to make an almost entirely pink piece work!

A.Buttle · member Member # Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 1724

So, what happens when it becomes 2002?

Akolyte · Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 6:14 pm

lol A. Buttle. I think if you fixed her right arm's position, it wouldn't look like an obscure growth on her booby. Nice pic otherwise.

feebsaint · Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 6:24 pm

Is it just me, or does she look like a really buff Gwen Stefani? (sp?)

Briareos · Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 6:39 pm

The hair and background tones and colors fade into each other too much, make more of a contrast I think.