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Kool
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Location: Bucuresti,Romania
PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 12:55 am     Reply with quote
need some feedback...
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Anthony
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 9:48 am     Reply with quote
The background looks interesting. The buildings are well done. The streaks coming from the moon are a little odd, but that's OK. The guy's coat is the biggest problem. It's very lumpy and not well defined. You need to think more about the folds and how it hangs. Get good photo reference if possible. Good luck with it
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Awetopsy
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 11:15 pm     Reply with quote
whoa... those are some massive neck muscles!!

not bad.. I agree with anthony, the coat does need to be defined much more.. but good work so far.
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Pringle
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 11:38 pm     Reply with quote
I really like the buildings in the background. Maybe you should think more about the lightsourece(s). If the main light is comming from the back, then the coat and the trousers would be much darker. I'm Looking foreward to see the end result.
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