[Leo]

Heya folks!

i know this is boring, simple, crappy image (non original - enayla-styled) etc. did it quite fast 3-4 hours maybe:



open fire guys for some crits.

-leo

[Shaded]

I think thats brilliant, mate. I thoroughly enjoy the mood in this one.

[immi]

Wonderbra advertisement?

It's cool, looks like you spent 3 of those 3-4 hours on the breasts eh? It's a nice pic, but the face seems a bit flat (excuse the pun) compared to the chest.

[nickmarksdotcom]

I am a sucker for cleavage! Great painting! The choice in colors is great...the dark crimson reds and blacks really work. It could be a vampire drawing if you added a little trickle of blood out of the corner of her lip.

She kinda looks like Famka Jennson...the chick who played Jean Gray in the X-men movie.

[Junior]

Talk about Push-UP.... can she breath?
Like the shading, nice athmosphere going on.

[Junior]

How did you get that skin texture?
I really have to learn how to do that.
I know it's basic stuff, but hey!, I'm just an amatuer teenager

Thanks

[DiXter]

very nice!
But i think her chin looks abit maleish..
but other then that i really like this one. Very moody

[SoMK]

Leeeeoooooo :)) Ok, I understand now why you were so quiet :) Springtime, uh ? She's gorgeous ! And I really dig the "lace" effect on the fabric.. yay :) crits ?.. uhhhh.. it's just imho of course, but her breast seems too round and "perfect"... but hey, that's your point of view that matters ! :)

[Vgta]

Very cool looking just two things that have been mentioned before, the face does look a tad "flat" compared to the rest of her body and the spacing on her chest plate seems too long. Meaning her boobs hang too low.
How did you get that skin texture? It's great.

[CyberLink]

The picture look very nice :-)

The only thing about the pic is that a right lower part of her face looks like it has been cut over.

[Jezebel]

Hey, I really like this image... I have two crits. 1 - even though the left side of her face is dark, I think that a bit of her eye would still be showing. Might look cool to put in this deep colored highlight... might look kinda wicked or something Second crit is that she has a really high forehead... the only reason I point it out is because I'm not sure you noticed. But I'm all for drawing "imperfect" females with slightly exaggerated features. It doesn't look "bad"... just an observation

My favorite part is the reddish highlight reflecting off her skin from the pendant. I think most people would ignore such an important detail... looks very very nice

Beth

[Jezebel]

I have no place trying to do a paintover since you're way better than me... but I tweaked a couple of things just to show you what I meant. I lowered her forehead a little and I tried to pull off the slightly visible eye thing on the left... but... well... I suck You get the idea though.



beth

[Gimbal8]

"Got Milk?"

Great image. My 2 crits: The clavicles don't seem to cast a shadow on the underside of them. (Wait, is that right? Clavicles...)

My second crit is that the picture seems to stop at the breast when I try to scroll down further. Ok, that wasn't really a crit. But I think it might look cool if you extended the image to include the belly area as it fades to darkness. Or maybe I just want to see more of her.

Now I can't tell if I'm being a pig or if I'm offering a critique. Oh yeah! Collar bones! That's what I was trying to say earlier. I think my blood sugar is too low and my brain has taken a nap.

[Dryfire]

fantasmical man, genius

[Frosted Flame]

Now, THAT'S a set of baby-feeders.

[TylerHunter]

Good work, and 3-4 hours Dizamn!, awsome work.

Jezbel, this goes to you,

The visible eye this is right, but the forhead while too long on his, is too short on yours, but in actuallity, unless your being an Idealist, Human beings can go either way cause we all have a variety of head shapes and sizes. Im rambling now

:O Tyler

[Akolyte]

Buy in Bulk

I like the attitude, but the face is being overtaken by the breasts. Unless that was your whole point :P Awesome pic.

[Zorglub]

Those breasts look mighty deliscious

[Dthind]

Respectfully, this is not very Enayla like. but I understand what you mean. I like the image. IF I were going to crit:

1) The forehead is rather tall
2) The right eye probably should not be as obscured
3) The left boob is almost too dark, and almost has a different shape (oval as opposed to circular, kind of)

But most of all;

4) The space between the chin and the cleavage, based on the perfection of the breasts is too far. This woman would be seven feet tall to maintain this ratio.

All in all I like the image !!

[ June 11, 2001: Message edited by: Dthind ]

[Sc00p-]

Am I being silly, or is it that her neck is much too long?

I love boobies.

[Vividetail]

she is not pretty, but certainly very interesting looking.

[kos.mandis]

Love 'em, and your technique is excellent...

What freaks me out thought is that her face looks a bit like a man to me

no offence, the drawing is awesome

[Capt.FlushGarden]

bloody nice pictcha!
I'm no good at anatomy but isn't her face a bit narrow or is it jut me? anyway...very nice brea...brush strokes!

[Leo]

Hi again,
uh i didn't expect so much comments at this work...

Shaded :: this is not a brilliant picture just a moody painting. but glad that you like it anyway.

immi :: mwahaha! immi dude how did you know? yeah since there is no reference used - i 'played' a lot with breasts trying to catch them right.

nickmarksdotcom :: Thanks... didn't see X-Men yet =) as for vamps brrr... i don't like this kind of subject.

Junior :: i'm a bad teacher tough, but the keypoint is simple - skin isn't just a surface covered by 'flesh' color. Many words been said about that at Stiven Stahlerg's page and other 3d guys and there are some tutorials around.

DiXter :: it's result of drawing from mind and a little expirience in this field but... thanks!

SoMK :: Na, i'm so quiet because of my scientific research... we'll have some hardcore exams soon. Yep the breasts are 'bad' due to my lack of expirience but hey, don't tell it to anyone - i'm doing a 'repaint' of Aki Ross from Final Fantasy... and the breasts are seems to be ok .

Vgta :: thanks for the crits... as for the skin as i said before, some stuff can be found at http://optidigit.com/stevens/ - all you need is just apply those techniques to 2d paint.

CyberLink :: thanks dude! there are tons of flaws that my eye just didn't see while i paint.

Jezebel :: thank you beth. always been impressed how people noticed these little details, especially if you paint them automaticly without thinking. I played with her right eye but it doesn't work as i expected so i dropped that idea. Maybe forehead is a bit high but don't forget that eyeline divide human head onto 2 equal parts. On your paintover lover part is bigger than upper. But hey it's just your point of view!

Gimbal8 :: hehe! it's happens because first time i only focused on her face and i was too lazy to add some more exept breasts .

Dryfire :: thanks dude =)

Frosted Flame :: oh if it was so...

TylerHunter :: it was fast because there is no any background, no color variations, very simple cloth and the painting were done in low-res (yes, you see the original size above).

Akolyte :: haha! wow guys... i didn't thinked that breasts can spark so much attention.

Zorglub ::

Dthind :: i said enayla-styled and it doesn't mean that her work is awful... nope. Thanks for all of your crits (i see some obvious mistakes now).

Sc00p- :: show me the man who don't like boobies .

Vividetail :: ok, thanks.

kos.mandis :: thanks man! As for male face uh... lack of expirience i think.

Capt.FlushGarden :: whoa captain on the bridge! Everybody see that brushstrokes =).

ok, once again thank you all people for your crits... i still need more work!

-leo